Writing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Jawaban Anda kurang natural dan terdapat kesalahan tata bahasa seperti penggunaan 'I always writing' yang seharusnya 'I always write'. Selain itu, kalimat terlalu panjang dan berulang-ulang. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat yang lebih singkat dan jelas dengan struktur yang benar.

Ví dụ: Yes, I write a lot, especially in the morning. I find that I feel more inspired and gain new ideas at that time, so I usually write about my daily activities or my inspirations.

Gợi ý: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan terdapat pengulangan kata yang tidak perlu. Struktur kalimat juga kurang tepat sehingga sulit dipahami. Cobalah untuk menyusun kalimat yang lebih terstruktur dan gunakan kosakata yang tepat untuk menjelaskan alasan Anda.

Ví dụ: I usually write about my daily activities, but I especially love writing poetry because it allows me to express my thoughts and feelings word by word.

Gợi ý: Jawaban Anda tidak lengkap dan kalimatnya tidak jelas serta banyak kesalahan tata bahasa. Anda perlu menjawab dengan kalimat yang lengkap dan jelas, serta menghindari pengulangan dan kesalahan struktur.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think what I write can change over time because my ideas and inspirations evolve. Also, my writing might inspire or motivate others.

Gợi ý: Jawaban Anda mengandung kesalahan tata bahasa dan kalimat yang kurang jelas. Anda perlu menggunakan struktur kalimat yang benar dan menjelaskan alasan preferensi Anda dengan lebih spesifik dan teratur.

Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting to typing because writing with a pen helps me feel more inspired and remember vocabulary better, which is sometimes difficult when I type.

× I always writing a lot especially in the morning because I think when it when the morning arrived, I get more know knowledge and I get more inspired.

✓ I always write a lot especially in the morning because I think when the morning arrives, I get more knowledge and I get more inspired.

The phrase 'I always writing' is incorrect because 'always' should be followed by the base form of the verb with 'do' for emphasis, so it should be 'I always write'. Also, 'when the morning arrived' should be in present tense 'when the morning arrives' to match the habitual action. 'Know knowledge' is incorrect; it should be 'more knowledge'.

× when it when the morning arrived, I get more know knowledge and I get more inspired.

✓ when the morning arrives, I get more knowledge and I get more inspired.

The phrase 'when the morning arrived' uses past tense 'arrived' which is inconsistent with the present tense context. It should be 'when the morning arrives' to indicate a habitual action.

× I always like about I love about the poetry because I think when when I try to write by word by word it can contains my brain.

✓ I always like and love poetry because I think when I try to write word by word it can contain my thoughts.

The phrase 'I always like about I love about the poetry' is awkward and incorrect; 'like about' is unnecessary. Also, 'it can contains' is incorrect; 'contains' should be 'contain' after 'can'. 'My brain' is better expressed as 'my thoughts' for clarity.

× The things that I write will be changed because it's can be inspired for anyone and from my right or for my paper.

✓ The things that I write will change because they can inspire anyone from my writing or my paper.

'Will be changed' is passive and awkward here; 'will change' is better. 'It's can be inspired' is incorrect; 'can inspire' is correct. 'From my right' is likely a typo for 'my writing'.

× So I things for for example, when I try to.

✓ For example, when I try to...

The phrase 'So I things for for example' is ungrammatical and unclear. It should be simplified to 'For example' to introduce an example.

× I prefer to handwriting than more than typing because when I use pen I get more inspired and I get more vocabularies that it's so difficult when I try to type in.

✓ I prefer handwriting more than typing because when I use a pen I get more inspired and I learn more vocabulary, which is difficult when I try to type.

'Prefer to handwriting' is incorrect; 'prefer handwriting' is correct. 'Than more than typing' is redundant; 'more than typing' suffices. 'I get more vocabularies' is incorrect; 'I learn more vocabulary' is better. 'It's so difficult when I try to type in' is awkward; 'which is difficult when I try to type' is clearer.