Writing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了写作的重要性，但句子结构较为简单，且有些表达不够地道。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并避免重复，如将“express my feeling on daily life”改为“express my daily feelings”。同时，注意语法，如“write diary”应为“write a diary”。

Ví dụ: Yes, I write quite a lot. I usually keep a diary to express my daily feelings, which helps me relieve stress and share my happiness. Writing plays an important role in my life.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，如“prefer to riding”应为“prefer writing”，且句子结构不够连贯。建议使用更准确的语法和连接词，使表达更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: I prefer writing about events that make me feel sad because I believe expressing my emotions helps me relax and feel less upset than before.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误，如“will willing to write”应为“am willing to write”，且句子较为重复。建议使用更简洁的句子结构，并适当使用连接词提高连贯性。

Ví dụ: Yes, what I write changes with my daily emotions. When I'm sad, I write about things that upset me, and when I'm happy, I prefer to write joyful content. I believe the key is to express genuine feelings.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法和表达不自然的问题，如“article I written I wrote before in a handwrite form”表达混乱。建议简化句子，使用更自然的表达，并注意时态和词汇的正确使用。

Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting because reading my handwritten notes from the past makes me feel closer to my former self. It creates a strong connection between my present and past, which is very exciting.

× I prefer to riding some of the events that made me feel sad because I think my emotion need to have an output to express.

✓ I prefer riding some of the events that made me feel sad because I think my emotion needs to have an output to express.

动词prefer后面接动名词形式（-ing），而不是不定式to + 动词原形。此外，emotion是单数，谓语动词需用第三人称单数形式needs。

× I always write diary to express my feeling on daily life and I think it is a good way to relieve our stress, to express our happiness and so on.

✓ I always write a diary to express my feelings about daily life and I think it is a good way to relieve our stress, to express our happiness and so on.

diary是可数名词，需加冠词a；feeling应为复数形式feelings；表达习惯用about daily life而非on daily life。

× I think my emotion need to have an output to express.

✓ I think my emotion needs to have an output to express.

emotion为单数，谓语动词需用第三人称单数形式needs。

× I will willing to write more delightful things.

✓ I will be willing to write more delightful things.

情态动词will后面应接动词原形或be + 形容词，willing是形容词，需用be动词构成be willing。

× if I read the article I written I wrote before in a handwrite form, I will feel that I am closer to myself from the past.

✓ if I read the article I wrote before in handwritten form, I will feel that I am closer to myself from the past.

written是过去分词，句中应使用过去式wrote；handwrite是动词，形容词应为handwritten；the article前的the使用正确。

× which is great exciting.

✓ which is greatly exciting.

great是形容词，exciting是形容词，修饰exciting应使用副词greatly。