Writing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答有些重复且表达不够流畅，建议避免重复表达同一意思，并且用更自然的句式来回答问题。可以尝试直接回答问题后，补充具体细节，使回答更丰富。

Ví dụ: I don't write a lot, usually about 500 words a day. Sometimes I keep a diary to record my thoughts and experiences.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议注意句子结构，避免重复和语法错误，同时用连词连接句子，使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: I enjoy writing about my opinions on events in my life because it helps me reflect on myself. I usually write either in a notebook or on my computer.

Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点，但句子结构不够清晰，建议注意时态和主谓一致，使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. What I wrote in the past is very different from what I write now because I have gained more experience and my perspective and writing style have developed.

Gợi ý: 回答中有许多口头语和重复，建议减少填充词，使用更简洁的表达，并且注意句子结构的完整性。

Ví dụ: I prefer typing because it's more convenient and allows me to edit easily. However, when taking notes during lectures, handwriting helps me remember the information better.

× I wrote a diary from time to time, but I do not.

✓ I write a diary from time to time, but I do not.

这里时态不一致，前半句用的是过去时 wrote，后半句用的是现在时 do not。根据上下文，表达的是习惯性动作，应该用一般现在时 write。

× I like writing down some of my opinions about something happens in my life and I'll I I do some reflection on myself.

✓ I like writing down some of my opinions about things that happen in my life and I do some reflection on myself.

原句中 'something happens' 应改为 'things that happen'，因为 'something' 后面需要用从句 'that happen' 来修饰，且主语复数应与动词一致。'I'll I I' 是多余且错误的重复，应删除。

× So I write it down either on theory or on my computer.

✓ So I write it down either on paper or on my computer.

'on theory' 用法不正确，应该是 'on paper' 表示写在纸上。

× The things I wrote in the past is very different from things I read now because I gain more experiences in my perspective, develop and of course my writing style will change.

✓ The things I wrote in the past are very different from the things I read now because I have gained more experience and developed my perspective, and of course my writing style will change.

主语 'The things' 是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式 'are'。'gain more experiences' 应改为 'have gained more experience' 以符合现在完成时表达经历的增加。'develop' 应改为过去分词 'developed' 以与前文时态一致。

× I find it's more easy to, for me to remember things.

✓ I find it's easier for me to remember things.

'more easy' 是错误的比较级形式，正确的比较级是 'easier'。此外，'to, for me to' 结构重复，应简化为 'for me to'。