Writing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答中有语法错误和用词不当，例如“authorize”应为“write”。回答不够简洁，且表达不够自然。建议使用简单直接的句子，避免重复。

Ví dụ: Yes, I write a lot because I love literature and films. After reading a book or watching a movie, I often write my thoughts and feelings about them.

Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点，但句子结构较复杂且有语法错误，如“it's quite private that”不自然。建议简化句子，使用更自然的表达，并增加连接词使逻辑更清晰。

Ví dụ: I like to write about my personal emotions because it's hard for me to express them directly to others, like my parents or friends. Writing helps me understand and process my feelings.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，如“my favorites are changing”应为“my preferences change”。建议使用正确的时态和更清晰的表达，避免重复。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think what I write will change because my personality and preferences change over time, which affects the topics I like to write about.

Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点，但有语法错误，如“ride something by hand”应为“write something by hand”。建议注意词汇的正确使用，并使句子更流畅自然。

Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting because typing feels cold to me, with the clicking sounds of the keyboard and mouse. Writing by hand feels warmer and more personal.

× Reading a whole book or watching a movie.

✓ I often write a lot after reading a whole book or watching a movie.

这句话是一个不完整的句子，缺少主语和谓语动词。应将其与前一句合并，形成完整句子。

× I like to write my personal emotions because it's quite private that it's hard for me to express it directly to others such as my parents or my friends by words.

✓ I like to write about my personal emotions because they are quite private and it's hard for me to express them directly to others such as my parents or my friends in words.

情感是复数，代词应使用复数形式'them'，且表达更自然应使用'write about'。

× I think definitely because of my personality and my favorites are changing through the days and it's probably affect what I love to write, so it's definitely will change.

✓ I think definitely because my personality and my favorites are changing over the days and it probably affects what I love to write, so it will definitely change.

情态动词'will'不应与'definitely'连用时放在一起，且动词'affect'应加-s以符合主语单数。

× I just enjoy ride something by hand and I think it contains warmth.

✓ I just enjoy writing something by hand and I think it contains warmth.

动词'enjoy'后应接动名词形式，'ride'用法错误，应改为'writing'。