Writing— Part 1 Báo cáo
Cuộc hội thoại
Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you write a lot?
Thí sinh
Yes, as a Senior High student, I have to write a lot to finish my school assignments, from mathematics to Chinese language. Additionally, I love the sense of writing, which gives me an opportunity to express myself. It's a good way to relax.
Giám khảo
What do you like to write? Why?
Thí sinh
To be honest, I enjoy writing some short stories and Diaries which are created all by myself. For example, I often write one or two short stories in my spare time in order to give me an opportunity to express myself.
Giám khảo
Do you think the things you write would change?
Thí sinh
Of course, nowadays everything is changing all the time, not to mention my stories rely too much on my personal experiences and realistic emotions. So considering all these above, the things I write would definitely change as time flies.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
Thí sinh
To be honest, I always tend to do some handwriting when I want to recall something, as handwriting is one of the most traditional ways that humans use to express their feelings and emotions. It can bring us human calmness and make us peaceful.
Đánh giá
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Part 1
Do you write a lot?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 回答较为自然且内容丰富，但部分表达略显重复，如“have to write a lot”和“from mathematics to Chinese language”可以更简洁。建议避免冗余，使用更连贯的连接词，使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I write quite frequently because my school assignments cover various subjects, including mathematics and Chinese. Moreover, I enjoy writing as it allows me to express my thoughts and helps me relax.
What do you like to write? Why?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答内容重复，尤其是“express myself”出现两次。建议使用更多样的词汇和句式，避免重复，同时增加具体细节以丰富内容。
Ví dụ: I enjoy writing short stories and keeping a diary because it allows me to explore my creativity and reflect on my daily experiences.
Do you think the things you write would change?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答中表达有些冗长且不够简洁，部分句子结构复杂。建议简化句子，使用更自然的表达，并增加具体例子说明变化。
Ví dụ: Yes, I believe my writing will change over time because my stories are based on my personal experiences, which evolve as I grow.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答表达较好，但部分词汇使用不够地道，如“human calmness”。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并适当使用连接词使句子更流畅。
Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting when I want to remember something because it feels more personal and helps me feel calm and focused.
Ngữ pháp
× I enjoy writing some short stories and Diaries which are created all by myself.
✓ I enjoy writing some short stories and diaries which are created all by myself.
diaries 是 diary 的复数形式，且作为普通名词不需要大写，错误在于将 diaries 写成了大写形式。应使用小写形式表示复数。
× I often write one or two short stories in my spare time in order to give me an opportunity to express myself.
✓ I often write one or two short stories in my spare time in order to give myself an opportunity to express myself.
动词短语 'give me an opportunity' 中，'give' 后面应接反身代词 'myself'，因为表达的是给自己机会，使用 'me' 不符合英语习惯。
× my stories rely too much on my personal experiences and realistic emotions.
✓ my stories rely too much on my personal experiences and realistic emotions.
该句中 'rely on' 的用法正确，无需修改。
× the things I write would definitely change as time flies.
✓ the things I write will definitely change as time flies.
此处表达将来时，使用 'would' 不符合语境，应使用 'will' 表示确定的将来变化。
× I always tend to do some handwriting when I want to recall something, as handwriting is one of the most traditional ways that humans use to express their feelings and emotions.
✓ I always tend to do some handwriting when I want to recall something, as handwriting is one of the most traditional ways that humans use to express their feelings and emotions.
该句语法正确，无需修改。
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