Writing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: この回答は少し冗長で文法的な誤りもあります。より自然で効果的な答えにするために、簡潔にし、文法を正しく使い、具体的な理由を述べることが重要です。例えば、"I don't write a lot, but recently I've been practicing to improve my English writing skills. Writing also helps me express my feelings when I'm sad."のように答えると良いでしょう。

Ví dụ: I don't write a lot, but recently I've been practicing to improve my English writing skills. Writing also helps me express my feelings when I'm sad.

Gợi ý: この回答は文法的に不自然で、意味が伝わりにくいです。質問に直接答え、具体的な内容を簡潔に述べることが必要です。例えば、"I like to write notes before meetings because it helps me remember important points and organize my thoughts."のように答えると良いでしょう。

Ví dụ: I like to write notes before meetings because it helps me remember important points and organize my thoughts.

Gợi ý: 回答は概ね理解できますが、文法の誤りと冗長さがあります。より自然にするために、簡潔にし、文法を正しく使い、理由を明確に述べることが大切です。例えば、"Yes, I consider my writing as a draft to remember ideas, but when I speak, I often change some words."のように答えると良いでしょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I consider my writing as a draft to remember ideas, but when I speak, I often change some words.

Gợi ý: この回答は意味が少し分かりにくく、文法的な誤りもあります。より明確で自然な表現にするために、理由を簡潔に述べることが重要です。例えば、"I prefer handwriting because it helps me think better and connect my ideas more easily."のように答えると良いでしょう。

Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting because it helps me think better and connect my ideas more easily.

× Not that much, but I was practicing writing nowadays in order for me to enhance my writing skills especially in English and as well as writing expresses helps me express my feelings whenever I am sad.

✓ Not that much, but I have been practicing writing nowadays in order to enhance my writing skills, especially in English, and writing also helps me express my feelings whenever I am sad.

The phrase 'I was practicing' suggests past continuous tense, which is not appropriate with 'nowadays' indicating current ongoing action. The present perfect continuous 'have been practicing' fits better. Also, 'writing expresses helps me express' is incorrect; 'writing also helps me express' is correct. 'In order for me to' is better simplified to 'in order to'.

× Sometimes I often forget what to say or sometimes whenever I try to speak to someone especially.

✓ Sometimes I often forget what to say, especially whenever I try to speak to someone.

The sentence is fragmented and redundant with 'sometimes' and 'often' used together and an incomplete ending. Combining and restructuring improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× In a meeting or something I before I speak I usually write down what are the topics as well as what other.

✓ In a meeting or something, before I speak, I usually write down the topics as well as other important points.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and incomplete phrases. 'I before I speak' is incorrect; it should be 'before I speak'. 'What are the topics' is a question form, but here it should be a statement: 'the topics'. 'What other' is incomplete and unclear; 'other important points' clarifies the meaning.

× But sometimes whenever I try to speak to it, some words change and that is different from what I have wrote.

✓ But sometimes whenever I try to speak, some words change and that is different from what I have written.

The verb 'wrote' is simple past tense, but after 'have' we need the past participle form 'written'. Also, 'speak to it' is unclear and unnecessary; 'speak' alone suffices.

× I prefer handwriting for me to exercise my hands as well as I believe that my hand is connected.

✓ I prefer handwriting because it helps me exercise my hands, and I believe that my hand is connected.

The phrase 'for me to exercise' is awkward; 'because it helps me exercise' is clearer. Also, 'as well as' is better replaced with 'and' to connect the ideas smoothly.

× My hand is nervous connected in my brain.

✓ My hand is nervously connected to my brain.

'Nervous' is an adjective, but here an adverb 'nervously' is needed to modify 'connected'. Also, the preposition 'in' is incorrect; 'connected to' is the correct phrase.

× That's why it's easier for me to write down ideas through hands.

✓ That's why it's easier for me to write down ideas by hand.

The phrase 'through hands' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'by hand' to indicate handwriting.