Writing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如时态混用和句子结构不完整。建议注意时态一致性，简洁明了地表达观点，同时避免重复和冗余。

Ví dụ: Yes, I wrote a lot when I was in high school. I enjoyed writing essays and short stories, and some of my works were even published on a Xinjiang website.

Gợi ý: 回答中有许多语气词和不完整的句子，影响表达的流畅性和清晰度。建议减少语气词，使用完整句子，并且具体说明喜欢写诗的原因。

Ví dụ: I prefer writing poems because I was influenced by many famous Chinese poets from the 1980s and 2000s. Writing poems allows me to express my feelings and attitudes creatively.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，句子不完整，表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，明确表达写作内容的变化，并提供具体细节。

Ví dụ: Yes, my writing has changed. In high school, I wrote mainly fiction and poems, but now at university, I prefer writing essays about real-life topics.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法和表达不连贯的问题。建议简洁明了地表达观点，使用连贯的句子，并具体说明喜欢手写的原因。

Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting because it gives me a unique and peaceful feeling. Writing essays or stories by hand helps me focus and enjoy the process more.

× Yes, when I was a high school student, I like writing a lot of I wrote a lot of essays and fictions and some of them even published in Xinjiang website.

✓ Yes, when I was a high school student, I liked writing a lot. I wrote a lot of essays and fictions, and some of them were even published on the Xinjiang website.

这里描述的是过去的情况，动词时态应使用过去式。'like' 应改为 'liked'，'published' 前应加被动语态助动词 'were'，并且 'on the Xinjiang website' 是正确的介词搭配。

× some of them even published in Xinjiang website.

✓ some of them were even published on the Xinjiang website.

'publish' 的被动语态需要助动词 'were'，且表示在网站上发布应使用介词 'on'，而不是 'in'。

× Ah, I prefer to write some poems, uh, because I was influenced by many famous poems in Chinese, uh, especially from the 1980s, from two 2000s year, uh, like or someone, uh, I think write poems is a great way to show my attitude and express my.

✓ Ah, I preferred to write some poems, uh, because I was influenced by many famous Chinese poems, especially from the 1980s and the 2000s, uh, like or someone, uh, I think writing poems is a great way to show my attitude and express myself.

这里描述的是过去的偏好，'prefer' 应改为过去式 'preferred'。'write poems' 应改为动名词形式 'writing poems'，'express my' 不完整，应补充为 'express myself'。

× I think write poems is a great way to show my attitude and express my.

✓ I think writing poems is a great way to show my attitude and express myself.

动词 'think' 后接动名词 'writing'，而不是不定式或原形动词。'express my' 不完整，应为 'express myself'。

× Ah yes, as my I mentioned, I prefer to write fictions or poems when I was a high school student, but after coming to university I the habits has changed.

✓ Ah yes, as I mentioned, I preferred to write fictions or poems when I was a high school student, but after coming to university, my habits have changed.

描述过去的习惯时，'prefer' 应用过去式 'preferred'。'the habits has changed' 主语是复数，应改为 'my habits have changed'。

× after coming to university I the habits has changed.

✓ after coming to university, my habits have changed.

句中 'I the habits' 结构错误，应改为 'my habits'，表示“我的习惯”。

× I prefer to write some more reality. Some essays are more related.

✓ I prefer to write more realistic essays. Some essays are more related.

'write some more reality' 语法不通，应改为 'write more realistic essays'，用形容词修饰名词。

× Some of them even published in Xinjiang website.

✓ Some of them were even published on the Xinjiang website.

表示在网站上发布，介词应为 'on'，而不是 'in'。

× When I write some essays or fictions by word by word, it's really give you a it is a really peaceful enjoyment.

✓ When I write some essays or fictions word by word, it really gives me a really peaceful enjoyment.

'give you a it is a' 结构混乱，应改为 'gives me a really peaceful enjoyment'，主语和宾语一致，且表达清晰。

× it's really give you a it is a really peaceful enjoyment.

✓ it really gives me a really peaceful enjoyment.

主语 'it' 是单数，谓语动词应为第三人称单数形式 'gives'，而不是 'give'。