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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you write a lot?

Thí sinh

Oh yes, I have the habit of writing in. I always writing down everything because I think right and on my no boat is a safety way.

Giám khảo

What do you like to write? Why?

Thí sinh

Actually I has been write a diary. From my primary school, the blending of notables are really for a trial, but I delight to read font from time to time. Because I think the notable is full of my memories in my primary school.

Giám khảo

Do you think the things you write would change?

Thí sinh

Oh yes, now day I just right. Dumb. Remember some quota from both. Two thinking provoking but in the future if I have a job I will train right worker related of stuff. Maybe is Tom table old meeting minus.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?

Thí sinh

Actually, actually, I loved him writing. Because I think her writing was very important for me. In. Typing is. Matt is trouble for me.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Do you write a lot?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 你嘅回答有啲語法錯誤同埋用詞唔自然,例如「I always writing down everything」應該係「I always write down everything」。另外,句子結構唔完整,令意思唔清晰。建議你用簡單正確嘅句子,直接回應問題,並且避免冗贅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I write a lot because I like to record my thoughts and ideas. Writing helps me remember important things and organize my day better.

What do you like to write? Why?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: 你嘅回答有多處語法錯誤,例如「I has been write a diary」應該係「I have been writing a diary」。另外,句子唔通順,詞彙使用唔準確,令意思難以理解。建議你用清晰嘅句子結構,並用適當嘅詞彙表達原因。

Ví dụ: I like to write a diary because I have been doing it since primary school. It helps me keep my memories and reflect on my daily experiences.

Do you think the things you write would change?

Điểm: 20.0

Gợi ý: 你嘅回答非常難以理解,語法錯誤多,詞彙使用混亂,句子結構不完整。建議你先理清思路,用簡單句子直接回答問題,並用連接詞連接想法,使回答更連貫。

Ví dụ: Yes, the things I write now are simple notes and quotes. In the future, if I have a job, I will write work-related documents and reports.

Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?

Điểm: 25.0

Gợi ý: 你嘅回答有多處語法錯誤同埋用詞唔準確,例如「I loved him writing」應該係「I love handwriting」。句子斷裂,令意思唔清楚。建議你用完整句子表達喜好,並解釋原因。

Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting because it feels more personal and helps me remember things better. Typing can be difficult and less comfortable for me.

Ngữ pháp

Verb + -ing form

× I always writing down everything because I think right and on my no boat is a safety way.

I always write down everything because I think writing in my notebook is a safe way.

學生錯誤使用了動詞的 -ing 形式 'writing' 作為主動詞,正確應使用動詞原形 'write' 來表達習慣性動作。此外,'no boat' 應為 'notebook',且 'right' 應為 'writing'。此句中動詞形式錯誤導致語意不清。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I have the habit of writing in.

I have the habit of writing in my notebook.

句子中 'writing in' 後缺少介詞賓語,應補充 'my notebook' 以完整表達寫作的對象。缺少介詞賓語造成句子不完整。

Third person singular issue

× Actually I has been write a diary.

Actually, I have been writing a diary.

主詞為第一人稱單數 'I',助動詞應為 'have' 而非 'has'。此外,'write' 應改為現在完成進行式 'been writing' 以符合語境。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× From my primary school, the blending of notables are really for a trial, but I delight to read font from time to time.

Since my primary school, the collection of notes has really been a trial, but I enjoy reading them from time to time.

'From my primary school' 應改為 'Since my primary school' 表示時間起點。'blending of notables' 應為 'collection of notes'。'delight to read font' 語意不明,改為 'enjoy reading them'。介詞及詞彙使用錯誤導致句意不清。

Singular and plural issue

× the blending of notables are really for a trial

the collection of notes is really a trial

主詞 'collection' 為單數,動詞應用單數 'is'。'notables' 應為 'notes'。數量不一致造成主謂不一致。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I delight to read font from time to time.

I enjoy reading them from time to time.

'delight to read font' 用詞錯誤,'font' 不合語境,應用 'notes' 並用正確動詞 'enjoy reading'。代詞 'them' 指代筆記,使用正確代詞使句子通順。

Present tense issue

× Oh yes, now day I just right.

Oh yes, nowadays I just write.

'now day' 應為 'nowadays','right' 應為 'write'。時態及拼寫錯誤影響句意。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Remember some quota from both.

Remember some quotes from books.

'quota' 應為 'quotes','both' 用法錯誤,應為 'books' 或其他合適名詞。介詞及詞彙使用錯誤。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Two thinking provoking but in the future if I have a job I will train right worker related of stuff.

They are thought-provoking, but in the future, if I have a job, I will try to write work related stuff.

'Two' 應為 'They','thinking provoking' 應為 'thought-provoking'。'train right worker related of stuff' 語意不明,推測為 'try to write work related stuff'。代詞及詞彙使用錯誤。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Maybe is Tom table old meeting minus.

Maybe it is some old meeting minutes.

句子中詞彙錯誤,'Tom table old meeting minus' 應為 'some old meeting minutes'。介詞及詞彙使用錯誤導致句意不明。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Actually, actually, I loved him writing.

Actually, I really love handwriting.

'loved him writing' 用法錯誤,應為 'love handwriting'。代詞及動詞形式錯誤。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Because I think her writing was very important for me.

Because I think handwriting is very important for me.

'her writing' 應為 'handwriting',代詞使用錯誤。

Sentence structure errors

× In. Typing is. Matt is trouble for me.

Typing is a matter of trouble for me.

句子結構錯誤,斷句不當,應合併為完整句子。詞彙 'Matt' 應為 'matter'。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

FullFilled; Crowded with; Occupied; Replete; Comprehensive
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
OldElderly; Dilapidated; Worn; Antique; Mature
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