Writing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，如“nowaday”应为“nowadays”，“ride”应为“write”。建议加强基础语法和词汇的准确使用，避免拼写错误，同时使表达更流畅自然。

Ví dụ: I don't write as much as I used to. Nowadays, I mostly type on my computer or phone because I rarely carry paper and pen with me.

Gợi ý: 回答内容不清晰，词汇使用错误（如“housing”、“knobs”、“shot”），表达混乱。建议明确表达写作内容，使用准确词汇，并简洁说明原因。

Ví dụ: I like to write in my diary and sometimes short notes during class because these writings are personal and help me remember important things.

Gợi ý: 回答中有多处词汇和表达错误，如“Paris or rock”、“fillings”、“dragon”，导致意思不明确。建议使用准确词汇，表达清晰具体，避免模糊和错误。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think what I write will change. Recently, I have been writing diaries to record my feelings, but in the future, I might write more professional articles related to my major or financial topics.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和词汇混淆，如“acid”、“disappear and she said dissertation”，表达不完整。建议理清思路，使用正确词汇，完整表达观点。

Ví dụ: It depends on what I need to write. For essays or dissertations, I prefer typing on a computer because it's easier to correct mistakes.

× I nowaday I just ride things type thing on my computer or on my phone.

✓ Nowadays, I just write things on my computer or on my phone.

“nowaday”拼写错误，应为“nowadays”，且句子中“ride things type thing”应为“write things”。时态应使用现在时，表达现在的习惯。

× I don't have a paper or pen to in my pocket.

✓ I don't have a paper or pen in my pocket.

“to in”是错误的介词搭配，应去掉“to”，正确表达为“in my pocket”。

× If I have to write housing and I will write a diary or some short knobs in the class, those sort of things are private.

✓ If I have to write, I will write a diary or some short notes in class; those sorts of things are private.

“knobs”应为“notes”，表示笔记；“those sort of things”应为“those sorts of things”，主谓一致。

× Private, very private and shot.

✓ Private, very private and short.

“shot”应为“short”，形容词用来描述“notes”等。

× I mean in Paris or rock or recently I just write some diary to record my fillings at that time.

✓ I mean in the past or recently I just write some diary entries to record my feelings at that time.

“in Paris or rock”应为“in the past or recently”，表达时间；“some diary”应为“some diary entries”；“fillings”应为“feelings”。

× But maybe in the future I will write some more professional things to remember the dragon in my major or to record a financial.

✓ But maybe in the future I will write some more professional things to remember the knowledge in my major or to record financial information.

“dragon”应为“knowledge”；“a financial”应为“financial information”，形容词后需名词。

× Well I would say it really depends on what the content I need to write, if it's an acid or. Disappear and she said dissertation I would prefer to type it on computer because it can correct the word can be more easily, but.

✓ Well, I would say it really depends on the content I need to write. If it's an essay or dissertation, I would prefer to type it on the computer because it can correct the words more easily.

“acid or. Disappear and she said dissertation”应为“essay or dissertation”；“on computer”应为“on the computer”；“correct the word can be more easily”语序错误，应为“correct the words more easily”。