Writing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“torture”应为“literature”，且句子结构不够自然。建议注意单词拼写和语法准确性，避免用词错误，同时使句子更简洁流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I write a lot because I am currently involved in an academic project. I need to read a lot of literature and write reports every day to meet upcoming deadlines. Therefore, writing has become an essential part of my daily routine.

Gợi ý: 回答中表达不够清晰，存在重复和语法错误，如“what I what I have done”和“quiet”应为“quite”。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用正确的词汇表达观点。

Ví dụ: I like to write book reviews because after finishing a book, I find it helpful to jot down my thoughts to remember what I have read. Also, some ideas in the book are quite inspiring, so I think it's worthwhile to write them down.

Gợi ý: 回答中有严重语法和表达错误，如“Amit involving money academic projects”不清楚，且句子结构混乱。建议理清思路，使用正确的语法表达观点，并避免拼写错误。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think the things I write will change because now I am involved in many academic projects. Therefore, I need to write more literature reviews and research methodologies, shifting from everyday writing to more formal academic writing.

Gợi ý: 回答中时态使用不当，如“When I was reading diary”应为“when I write in my diary”，且“prefer to typing”应为“prefer typing”。建议注意时态一致性和动词形式的正确使用。

Ví dụ: Well, it depends. When I write in my diary, I prefer handwriting because it makes me feel more connected to the words. However, when I work on academic projects and need to write literature reviews, I prefer typing.

× I'm currently involved in academic project.

✓ I'm currently involved in an academic project.

这里的 'academic project' 是可数名词，前面需要加不定冠词 'an'。缺少冠词导致语法错误。

× I need to read all of the torture and write reports everyday to prepare for upcoming deadlines.

✓ I need to read all of the literature and write reports every day to prepare for upcoming deadlines.

单词 'torture' 是错误的，应为 'literature'（文献）。此外，'everyday' 是形容词，表示日常的，正确用法是 'every day'（每天）。

× Well, I like to write some books reviews because every time I finish a book I feel like you need to write down some thoughts to remember what I what I have done and then some ideas of the book are quiet inspiring.

✓ Well, I like to write some book reviews because every time I finish a book I feel like I need to write down some thoughts to remember what I have done and then some ideas of the book are quite inspiring.

'books reviews' 应为复合名词 'book reviews'，'you need' 应改为 'I need' 以保持主语一致，'quiet' 应为 'quite'，表示 '相当'。

× I feel like you need to write down some thoughts to remember what I what I have done and then some ideas of the book are quiet inspiring.

✓ I feel like I need to write down some thoughts to remember what I have done and then some ideas of the book are quite inspiring.

这里主语应为 'I'，而非 'you'，以表达自己的感受和需求。

× Probably because nowadays Amit involving money academic projects, so I need to write a lot of literature review and some research methodology.

✓ Probably because nowadays I am involved in many academic projects, so I need to write a lot of literature reviews and some research methodologies.

'Amit' 应为 'I am'，'money' 应为 'many'，表示许多，'literature review' 和 'research methodology' 应使用复数形式。

× Probably because nowadays Amit involving money academic projects, so I need to write a lot of literature review and some research methodology.

✓ Probably because nowadays I am involved in many academic projects, so I need to write a lot of literature reviews and some research methodologies.

动词 'involving' 用法错误，应使用被动语态 'am involved'。

× So I need to change the right thing for everyday into more academic writing.

✓ So I need to change the writing for every day into more academic writing.

'right thing' 应为 'writing'，'everyday' 应为 'every day'。

× When I was reading diary, I prefer handwriting 'cause it makes me feel more connected to the words that I'm writing.

✓ When I was reading my diary, I prefer handwriting because it makes me feel more connected to the words that I'm writing.

'reading diary' 应为 'reading my diary'，需要所有格；'cause' 是口语缩写，正式写作中应使用 'because'。

× And when I'm doing my academic projects and need to write some our literature review, I prefer to typing.

✓ And when I'm doing my academic projects and need to write some of our literature reviews, I prefer typing.

'need to write some our literature review' 应为 'need to write some of our literature reviews'，'prefer to typing' 应为 'prefer typing'。