Writing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to give a direct response to the question with clear and simple sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and avoid redundancy. Also, focus on relevant vocabulary related to writing.

Ví dụ: Yes, I write quite often, especially when I feel inspired or have important thoughts. For example, I like to write down my goals and prayers to keep track of them and stay motivated.

Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and difficult to understand. Try to clearly state what you like to write and explain why. Use simple and correct sentence structures and provide specific reasons or examples.

Ví dụ: I like to write my wishes because it helps me remember my goals and stay hopeful. Writing them down feels like a gift to myself that motivates me every day.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and lacks specific details. Try to directly answer the question and explain why the things you write might change. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think the things I write can change because my goals and wishes may evolve over time as I grow and experience new things.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat understandable but contains many errors and unclear phrases. Try to clearly state your preference and explain your reasons using simple and correct sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting because typing on a keyboard sometimes makes me nervous and uncomfortable. Writing by hand feels more natural and helps me think better.

× It depends on my mind's end.

✓ It depends on my state of mind.

The phrase 'mind's end' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'state of mind' to indicate one's mental condition or mood.

× How can I get my patience or other ones?

✓ How can I get my patience or others?

The phrase 'other ones' is awkward here. 'Others' is the correct pronoun to refer to additional items or people.

× For example if if I get a pray I get to write my all of my things with I want to.

✓ For example, if I get a prayer, I write all of the things I want to.

The sentence is confusing and contains repetition ('if if'). The word 'pray' should be 'prayer'. The phrase 'my all of my things with I want to' is ungrammatical and is corrected to 'all of the things I want to' for clarity.

× Want like the the score, Aviles, the master sports in Judah and the other ones and especially in Isles.

✓ I want things like the score, Aviles, the master sports in Judah, and others, especially in Isles.

The sentence lacks a subject and proper structure. 'Want like' is incorrect; it should be 'I want things like'. 'The other ones' is replaced with 'others' for clarity.

× I prefer to write my wishes, so that's gift that get me in the in my prayers.

✓ I prefer to write my wishes, so that's a gift that I include in my prayers.

The phrase 'gift that get me in the in my prayers' is ungrammatical. It is corrected to 'a gift that I include in my prayers' to make sense and proper pronoun use.

× Don't be. Don't end the this wishes we will be with Grim will reminds me and this is the type of the things what they want to get like this core files or other ones.

✓ Don't be. Don't end these wishes; they will remind me, and these are the types of things I want to get, like these core files or others.

The sentence is confusing and contains incorrect pronouns and articles. 'The this wishes' is corrected to 'these wishes'. 'Will reminds me' is corrected to 'will remind me'. 'What they want to get' is corrected to 'I want to get' for clarity.

× Yes, especially because the things that I want to get is listen, please listen, by gods and.

✓ Yes, especially because the things that I want to get are listened to by gods.

Subject-verb agreement error: 'things' is plural, so verb should be 'are'. The phrase 'listen, please listen, by gods and' is unclear and corrected to 'are listened to by gods' for grammatical correctness.

× And if if the hurt was the if they hurt.

✓ And if they were hurt.

The sentence is repetitive and ungrammatical. 'If if the hurt was the if they hurt' is corrected to 'If they were hurt' for clarity and correct tense.

× Once you get this things so closely and the God was was given.

✓ Once you get these things so closely, and God has given them.

'This things' is incorrect; it should be 'these things' (singular/plural issue). 'God was was given' is ungrammatical and corrected to 'God has given them' to use present perfect tense appropriately.

× I prefer to rider handwriting because in the in the keyboards and in keyboards in most of the times I have the somehow some heart moments which which was getting my minds being so nervous and bad in their handwriting.

✓ I prefer handwriting because when using keyboards, most of the time I have some hard moments which make my mind nervous and affect my handwriting.

The sentence contains multiple errors: 'rider' should be 'write' or 'handwriting' is preferred; 'in the keyboards and in keyboards' is redundant; 'somehow some heart moments' is unclear and corrected to 'some hard moments'; 'was getting my minds being so nervous' is ungrammatical and corrected to 'make my mind nervous'; 'bad in their handwriting' is corrected to 'affect my handwriting' for clarity.

× You you always you writing it with comfort and did.

✓ You always write it comfortably.

The sentence is repetitive and ungrammatical. 'You you always you writing it with comfort and did' is corrected to 'You always write it comfortably' for proper verb form and adverb use.