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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you write a lot?

Thí sinh

No, I'm not to enjoy writing iPhone writing boring you finally had to write something like writing my iseor my excitement. I need to spend a lot of time to finish it. I feel exhausted when I writing.

Giám khảo

What do you like to write? Why?

Thí sinh

I don't like riding at all. I cannot find any interesting things during writing. I feel so sleepy when I write him something.

Giám khảo

Do you think the things you write would change?

Thí sinh

Yes, I believe so the more knowledge should and the theories I learned the more things I write a word change in the future so it when I grow up error ones writing Star Wars change for example when I was young.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?

Thí sinh

I still prefer the traditional way by handwriting because this is how I learn writing since I was little. I'm not getting used to use keyboard to express my ideas and false, I feel more comfortable to use the pen to ride my.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Do you write a lot?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达不清晰,语法和词汇错误较多,影响理解。建议简洁明了地表达观点,避免重复和无关内容。

Ví dụ: No, I don't write a lot because I find it boring and time-consuming. It often makes me feel tired.

What do you like to write? Why?

Điểm: 25.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在词汇错误和表达混乱,建议直接回答问题并提供具体原因,避免语法错误。

Ví dụ: I don't like writing because I find it uninteresting and it makes me feel sleepy.

Do you think the things you write would change?

Điểm: 20.0

Gợi ý: 回答内容混乱,缺乏逻辑和连贯性。建议先明确观点,再用具体例子支持,使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think my writing will change as I learn more. For example, when I was young, my writing was simple, but now I can write more complex ideas.

Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 回答表达基本清楚,但有语法和词汇错误。建议注意时态和词汇的正确使用,保持句子简洁。

Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting because I have been writing by hand since I was a child. I am not used to typing, and I feel more comfortable using a pen to write.

Ngữ pháp

Verb in the present participle form

× I feel exhausted when I writing.

I feel exhausted when I am writing.

这里需要使用现在进行时态,动词writing应使用现在分词形式并与助动词be连用,构成进行时态。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I don't like riding at all.

I don't like writing at all.

这里应使用动词writing(写作),而不是riding(骑行),是词汇错误。

Verb in the present participle form

× I feel so sleepy when I write him something.

I feel so sleepy when I write something.

这里的write后不应接人称代词him,且不符合语法结构,应直接接宾语something。

Sentence structure errors

× Yes, I believe so the more knowledge should and the theories I learned the more things I write a word change in the future so it when I grow up error ones writing Star Wars change for example when I was young.

Yes, I believe so. The more knowledge and theories I learn, the more the things I write will change in the future. For example, when I was young, my writing was different.

原句结构混乱,缺少标点,语序不正确,导致句意不清。需要拆分句子,调整语序,使表达清晰。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I still prefer the traditional way by handwriting because this is how I learn writing since I was little.

I still prefer the traditional way of handwriting because this is how I have learned writing since I was little.

短语应为"the way of handwriting",而不是"by handwriting"。此外,时态应使用现在完成时表示从过去持续到现在的动作。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I'm not getting used to use keyboard to express my ideas and false, I feel more comfortable to use the pen to ride my.

I'm not used to using the keyboard to express my ideas, and also, I feel more comfortable using a pen to write.

"getting used to"应改为"used to"表示习惯;"use"应改为动名词"using";"ride"应为"write",且句子结构需调整使表达通顺。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BoringTedious
ComfortablePleasant; Cozy; Loose; Leisurely
InterestingAbsorbing
LittleShort; Young; Brief; Minor
YoungYouthful; Immature; Fledgling; Offspring; Young people
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