Writing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: In your answer, try to use clear and correct sentences. Avoid unclear phrases like 'Right thing can help me' and 'writing also have me to'. Use simple, natural sentences and connect your ideas logically. For example, say 'I often write essays three times a week because it helps me improve my writing skills and learn new vocabulary.'

Ví dụ: Yes, I often write essays three times a week because it helps me improve my writing skills and learn new vocabulary. Also, writing allows me to understand the skills better and express my ideas clearly.

Gợi ý: Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' correctly. Also, use correct vocabulary and grammar, for example, 'reflect on my daily activities and experiences and emotions'.

Ví dụ: I like to write about myself because it helps me reflect on my daily activities and emotions. For example, writing about my experiences allows me to understand myself more clearly.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and has many grammar mistakes. Try to express your ideas simply and clearly. For example, say 'Yes, I think my writing will change as I gain more knowledge and experience. When I was a child, my writing was poor, but now I can write paragraphs and essays more easily and correctly.'

Ví dụ: Yes, I think my writing will improve as I learn more. For example, when I was a child, my writing was weak, but now I can write essays with good ideas and fewer mistakes.

Gợi ý: Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases. Use simple and clear sentences to explain your preference. For example, say 'I prefer handwriting because it helps me improve my writing skills and learn new vocabulary. Also, writing on paper helps me plan my ideas and correct mistakes easily.'

Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting because it helps me improve my writing skills and learn new words. For example, when I write on paper, I can organize my ideas and fix mistakes more easily.

× Yes, I often write an essay three times a week.

✓ Yes, I often write essays three times a week.

The word 'essay' should be plural 'essays' because the frequency 'three times a week' implies multiple essays, not just one.

× Right thing can help me to improve my writing skills and learn new vocabulary.

✓ The right thing can help me improve my writing skills and learn new vocabulary.

The phrase 'Right thing' is missing the definite article 'The'. Also, 'help me to improve' is better as 'help me improve' for natural English usage.

× Additionally, I find out that writing also have me to.

✓ Additionally, I find out that writing also helps me.

The verb 'have' is incorrect here; it should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'writing'. The phrase 'have me to' is incorrect and should be replaced with 'helps me'.

× Have a solid clearly an understand more about writing skill.

✓ It helps me have a solid and clear understanding of writing skills.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It needs restructuring to form a complete sentence with proper word order and articles.

× I like to write about myself which is related to my personality.

✓ I like to write about myself, which is related to my personality.

A comma is needed before 'which' to correctly introduce the non-restrictive relative clause.

× For example, I always write about myself, which is really important that I can find out it is reflect on my daily activity, Experian an emotion.

✓ For example, I always write about myself, which is really important because I can find out how it reflects my daily activities and experiences and emotions.

The sentence is fragmented and contains unclear phrases like 'Experian an emotion'. It needs rephrasing for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Additionally, I can understand myself more clearly.

✓ Additionally, I can understand myself more clearly.

This sentence is correct and needs no change.

× Yes, I believe the saying I have ray would be changed as I get the knowledge and experience is my writing have been improved and I can write a paragraph or essay easily without any mistake.

✓ Yes, I believe the things I have written will change as I gain knowledge and experience; my writing has improved and I can write a paragraph or essay easily without any mistakes.

The original sentence is confusing and contains errors in tense and word choice. It needs restructuring and correction of verb tenses and plural forms.

× For example as a child are my writing was at the bottom but now I can write with many openings properly and have the brainstorm easily.

✓ For example, as a child, my writing was poor, but now I can write many openings properly and brainstorm easily.

The phrase 'are my writing' is incorrect; it should be 'my writing'. Also, 'have the brainstorm' is incorrect; 'brainstorm' is used as a verb here.

× Yes, I definitely prefer hand writing when I am writing because.

✓ Yes, I definitely prefer handwriting when I am writing because it helps me improve my skills.

The sentence is incomplete and 'hand writing' should be one word 'handwriting'. The sentence needs completion for clarity.

× Handwritings can also help me to improve my writing skills and learn new vocabulary.

✓ Handwriting can also help me improve my writing skills and learn new vocabulary.

'Handwriting' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'handwritings'.

× For example, I always write in a paper which I find out.

✓ For example, I always write on paper, which I find helpful.

'Write in a paper' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'write on paper'. The sentence is incomplete and needs clarification.

× I can learn your cap salary Ann.

✓ I can learn vocabulary and spelling.

The original sentence is unclear and seems to be a mishearing or typo. It is corrected to a meaningful phrase related to learning vocabulary and spelling.

× I can plan the brainstorm and correct the mistake easily.

✓ I can plan my brainstorming and correct mistakes easily.

'Plan the brainstorm' is incorrect; 'brainstorming' is the correct noun form. Also, 'the mistake' should be plural 'mistakes' to generalize.