Writing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は自然ですが、文法の誤り（"typing with on a PC"や"forced in"）があり、意味が不明瞭な部分があります。より明確で正確な表現を使い、冗長な部分を避けることが重要です。例えば、"forced in"は意味が通じないため削除し、"typing on a PC"とすべきです。

Ví dụ: No, I don't write much these days because I prefer typing on a PC, which is more efficient. For example, I usually take notes or send messages using my smartphone or laptop.

Gợi ý: 文が断片的で、文法ミス（"sold freely"や"to looking back"）があります。文をつなげて一つのまとまった答えにし、正しい文法を使うことが必要です。また、具体的な理由や感情をもう少し詳しく述べると良いでしょう。

Ví dụ: I don't write much recently, but I used to enjoy keeping a diary because it was a personal space where I could freely express my emotions. Also, I enjoyed looking back at my past entries after some time.

Gợi ý: 回答が不明瞭で、文法や語彙の誤り（"hub"、"write. By hand or cautionary?"）があります。質問に直接答え、明確で一貫した文章を作ることが必要です。例えば、"My writing habits have completely changed"のように正確に表現しましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, my writing habits have completely changed. I used to enjoy keeping a diary, but now I rarely write by hand and prefer typing instead.

Gợi ý: 文が断片的で、文法ミス（"more fasted"、"Especially for long one"、"can be easy edit"）があります。文をつなげて流暢にし、正しい語彙と文法を使うことが重要です。

Ví dụ: I definitely prefer typing to handwriting because typing is faster and more efficient, especially for long documents. Also, it's easier to edit typed text.

× I prefer typing with on a PC which is more effective and forced in.

✓ I prefer typing on a PC which is more effective and faster.

The phrase 'typing with on a PC' is incorrect due to the unnecessary preposition 'with'. Also, 'forced in' seems to be a typo or incorrect word choice; 'faster' fits the context better. The correct phrase is 'typing on a PC'.

× For example, when I take notes or send messages I use my smart phone or laptop.

✓ For example, when I take notes or send messages, I use my smartphone or laptop.

A comma is needed after the introductory clause 'For example'. Also, 'smart phone' should be one word 'smartphone'.

× What do you like to write? Why?

✓ What do you like to write? Why?

No correction needed for this sentence as it is grammatically correct.

× I don't write much recently, but I used to enjoy keeping a diary.

✓ I haven't written much recently, but I used to enjoy keeping a diary.

The present perfect tense 'haven't written' is appropriate for recent actions continuing to the present, rather than simple present 'don't write'.

× Which was a quite personal space where I could express my emotions and sold freely.

✓ It was quite a personal space where I could express my emotions and feel free.

The sentence fragment 'Which was...' should be connected to the previous sentence or replaced with 'It was'. 'Sold freely' is incorrect; likely intended 'feel free'.

× Also it was enjoyable to looking back at past diary after awhile.

✓ Also, it was enjoyable to look back at past diaries after a while.

The verb after 'to' should be in base form 'look', not '-ing' form 'looking'. 'Diary' should be plural 'diaries' to refer to multiple entries. 'Awhile' should be two words 'a while'.

× Do you think the things you write would change?

✓ Do you think the things you write will change?

The modal verb 'would' is incorrect here; 'will' is appropriate for future predictions.

× Yes, my writing habit hub completely changed.

✓ Yes, my writing habit has completely changed.

'Hub' is a typo or incorrect word; 'has' is needed for present perfect tense to indicate change up to now.

× In the past I used to enjoy keeping a diary, but now I write. By hand or cautionary? Maybe once in a blue moon.

✓ In the past, I used to enjoy keeping a diary, but now I write by hand or occasionally, maybe once in a blue moon.

Fragment 'By hand or cautionary?' is unclear and incorrect; 'occasionally' fits the meaning. The sentence should be combined for clarity.

× I prefer typing to writing by hand.

✓ I prefer typing to writing by hand.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× Typing is more fasted and effective way to write documents.

✓ Typing is a faster and more effective way to write documents.

'Fasted' is incorrect; the correct comparative form is 'faster'. Also, 'a' is needed before 'faster' to modify 'way'.

× Especially for long one.

✓ Especially for long ones.

The phrase is a fragment; it should be 'Especially for long ones' to refer to long documents or texts.

× And also it can be easy edit. Edit it.

✓ Also, it is easy to edit.

The original sentences are fragmented and incorrect. The correct form is 'it is easy to edit'.