Writing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，且表达不自然。建议练习使用完整句子，注意时态一致，并避免重复和断断续续的表达。

Ví dụ: When I was in junior high school, my teacher asked us to write every day. At that time, I usually wrote a lot. However, after I graduated, I seldom write because I don't have much free time.

Gợi ý: 回答内容不完整且表达不清晰，句子结构混乱。建议用完整句子表达喜欢写的内容，并说明原因，避免断句和拼写错误。

Ví dụ: I like to write about my personal experiences, such as my childhood, because they are meaningful to me. I also enjoy writing about my future life and dreams.

Gợi ý: 表达不连贯且语法错误较多，内容不够具体。建议用完整句子说明写作内容会如何变化，并解释原因。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe the things I write will change over time. For example, my future goals and plans may change as I grow older, and my thoughts and opinions will also develop.

Gợi ý: 回答有一定内容，但表达不够流畅，部分词汇使用不当。建议用更自然的表达方式说明偏好，并提供具体理由和例子。

Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting because I think it is more personal and meaningful. For example, I write my diary by hand, which helps me express my feelings more deeply.

× When I am a junior high school students, our teacher.

✓ When I was a junior high school student, our teacher.

这里的主语是单数，应该用单数形式'student'，而不是复数'students'。另外，时态应为过去时，'am'应改为'was'。

× our teacher. Ask. Ask to write every day.

✓ our teacher asked us to write every day.

句子结构不完整，缺少主谓宾，且动词时态应为过去时。应将断句合并为完整句子。

× At that time I I usually right, right. Bob,

✓ At that time I usually wrote, wrote a lot.

'right'应为动词'write'的过去式'wrote'，且重复单词应去除。

× After I graduated from my school, I seldom to write because I have no time.

✓ After I graduated from my school, I seldom wrote because I had no time.

'seldom'后不加' to '，动词应为过去式'wrote'，时态应一致，'have'改为过去式'had'。

× I like to write. My personal experiences such as my. Childhood.

✓ I like to write about my personal experiences such as my childhood.

'experiences'前应加介词'about'，句子断句不当，应合并为完整句子。

× I think is meaningful to me.

✓ I think it is meaningful to me.

缺少主语'it'，导致句子不完整。

× And I like to ride my. Future life like Migos.

✓ And I like to write about my future life like Migos.

'ride'应为'write'，且句子断句错误，应合并为完整句子。

× And the things that I dreamed.

✓ And the things that I dreamed of.

动词'dream'后应加介词'of'，句子不完整。

× Yes, I think the things. I write all changed.

✓ Yes, I think the things I write have all changed.

主语'things'为复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式'have'。

× Such as my. Future goes or plans,

✓ Such as my future goals or plans,

'goes'应为'goals'，且句子断句错误，应合并为完整句子。

× I think when I'm getting older.

✓ I think when I get older,

'getting'在此处不合适，应该用一般现在时'get'表示将来时间。

× My thoughts and opening will be changed.

✓ My thoughts and opinions will change.

'opening'应为'opinions'，'will be changed'改为主动语态'will change'更自然。

× So I think.

✓ So I think so.

句子不完整，需加副词'so'使句子完整。

× I prefer handwriting with him writing because I think handwriting is the symbol of society, for example.

✓ I prefer handwriting when writing because I think handwriting is a symbol of society, for example.

'with him writing'不正确，应为'when writing'；'the symbol'改为'a symbol'更合适。

× I write my diary by hand.

✓ I write my diary by hand.

该句语法正确，无需修改。

× It helps me express my. Feelings more deeply.

✓ It helps me express my feelings more deeply.

句子断句错误，应合并为完整句子。

× And I think is meaningful to me.

✓ And I think it is meaningful to me.

缺少主语'it'，导致句子不完整。