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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you write a lot?

Thí sinh

No, I don't write a lot. I prefer to talk rather than right. Is not my. Stairs.

Giám khảo

What do you like to write? Why?

Thí sinh

You like to write I love to write Diaries because it can reflect on my day an. It can record my dating experiences.

Giám khảo

Do you think the things you write would change?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think. The things I write will change. 'Cause.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?

Thí sinh

Well, when I'm writing I prefer typing becauses more convenient and effective. Typing can help me. Do things more.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Do you write a lot?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答不够连贯,存在语法错误和表达不清的问题。建议练习完整且正确的句子表达,避免语法错误,并且回答要紧扣问题,避免无关内容。

Ví dụ: No, I don't write a lot because I find speaking more natural and easier for me.

What do you like to write? Why?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清,且句子结构不完整。建议使用完整句子,清晰表达原因,并避免重复。

Ví dụ: I like to write diaries because they help me reflect on my day and record my personal experiences.

Do you think the things you write would change?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: 回答过于简短且不完整,缺乏具体细节和连贯性。建议扩展回答,说明原因并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think the things I write will change over time because my thoughts and experiences evolve.

Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答表达基本清楚,但存在语法错误和不完整句子。建议使用完整句子,增加具体细节,并使用连接词使表达更自然。

Ví dụ: I prefer typing when I write because it is more convenient and efficient, allowing me to complete tasks faster.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Is not my. Stairs.

It is not mine.

这里使用了错误的代词形式,应该用 'It is not mine' 来表达“这不是我的”。'Is not my. Stairs.' 语法不完整且代词使用错误。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× You like to write I love to write Diaries because it can reflect on my day an.

I love to write diaries because it can reflect on my day.

句子中出现了错误的代词 'You like to write',应去掉,且 'Diaries' 不需要大写。'an' 是多余的。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× It can record my dating experiences.

It can record my daily experiences.

这里 'dating experiences' 可能是拼写错误,应为 'daily experiences',表示日常经历。

Sentence structure errors

× 'Cause.

Because of that.

单独使用 'Cause' 作为句子不完整,应补充完整表达原因。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Well, when I'm writing I prefer typing becauses more convenient and effective.

Well, when I'm writing, I prefer typing because it is more convenient and effective.

'becauses' 拼写错误,应为 'because',且缺少主语 'it'。

Sentence structure errors

× Typing can help me. Do things more.

Typing can help me do more things.

句子断开,'Do things more' 应与前句合并,形成完整句子。

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