Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you write a lot?
Thí sinh
No, not really. Nowadays I don't need to write a long essay.
Giám khảo
What do you like to write? Why?
Thí sinh
I don't like to write anything but in my life usually I would like white the essay to hand in my individual assignment.
Giám khảo
Do you think the things you write would change?
Thí sinh
Sorry I don't really understand but I think. It may be changed in the future. This is we cannot control about that.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
Thí sinh
In my daily life I prefer typing because it is faster and more convenience, but in the examination I prefer him write him because it can erase it or correctly more easily.
Do you write a lot?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答较简短且表达不够自然,建议增加细节说明,避免简单否定,提升表达的自然流畅度。
Ví dụ: No, I don't write a lot these days because most of my communication is through emails or messages, so I rarely need to write long essays.
What do you like to write? Why?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 语法错误较多,表达不清晰,建议使用正确的时态和词汇,明确表达喜欢写什么及原因。
Ví dụ: I usually write essays for my individual assignments because it helps me organize my thoughts and improve my writing skills.
Do you think the things you write would change?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答不连贯且语法错误明显,建议先确认问题含义,再用完整句子表达观点,避免语法错误。
Ví dụ: I'm not sure I understand the question, but I think the types of things I write might change in the future as my interests and needs evolve.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 表达中有词汇和语法错误,建议注意单词拼写和句子结构,清晰表达两种写作方式的偏好及原因。
Ví dụ: I prefer typing in daily life because it's faster and more convenient, but during exams, I prefer handwriting since it's easier to make corrections.
× I don't like to write anything but in my life usually I would like white the essay to hand in my individual assignment.
✓ I don't like to write anything but in my life usually I would like to write the essay to hand in my individual assignment.
这里的错误是动词形式错误,'white' 应该是 'write',因为句子中需要动词原形。动词拼写错误导致句意不清。建议注意动词拼写,确保使用正确的动词形式。
× It may be changed in the future.
✓ It may change in the future.
这里错误是动词时态使用不当,'may be changed' 是被动语态,但句意应为主动表达未来可能发生的变化,正确用法是 'may change'。建议理解情态动词后接动词原形的用法。
× but in the examination I prefer him write him because it can erase it or correctly more easily.
✓ but in the examination I prefer handwriting because it can be erased or corrected more easily.
这里错误是代词使用错误,'him write him' 不符合语法,应使用名词 'handwriting'。另外,'erase it or correctly' 也不正确,应该是被动语态 'be erased or corrected'。建议学习代词和名词的正确用法及被动语态结构。
× because it is faster and more convenience
✓ because it is faster and more convenient
这里错误是形容词和副词的使用错误,'convenience' 是名词,句中需要形容词 'convenient' 来修饰 'it'。建议区分名词和形容词的用法。
× Sorry I don't really understand but I think.
✓ Sorry, I don't really understand, but I think so.
这里句子结构不完整,缺少连接词和完整表达,'but I think' 后面应有补充内容或用 'so' 结束。建议注意句子完整性和连接词的使用。