Writing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi trước, sau đó giải thích thêm chi tiết một cách logic và tránh các câu rời rạc. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối các ý và tránh lặp từ.

Ví dụ: Yes, I write quite a lot every day because I enjoy it. For instance, I am currently working on a small project to write a book, which motivates me to practice writing regularly.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên trả lời câu hỏi một cách trực tiếp và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh. Ngoài ra, hãy cung cấp các chi tiết cụ thể hơn và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Tránh các lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác.

Ví dụ: I like to write about different aspects of life because they interest me. For example, I enjoy writing about signs, history, and my daily routine because they help me express my thoughts clearly.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể, sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu hoàn chỉnh. Hãy tránh các lỗi phát âm hoặc từ sai.

Ví dụ: I think the things I write about usually do not change because history is fixed and cannot be altered. Also, scientific facts are proven and remain the same over time.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên trả lời câu hỏi một cách trực tiếp và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh các câu bị ngắt quãng. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, chú ý ngữ pháp và phát âm chính xác.

Ví dụ: I prefer typing on my phone because it is very convenient. I can take notes anytime and anywhere without carrying a lot of paper and pencils.

× There is a special section for writing.

✓ There is a special section for writing.

The sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed.

× Because I have a small project of writing a book.

✓ I have a small project of writing a book.

Starting a sentence with 'Because' without completing the thought creates a sentence fragment. It should be connected to the previous sentence or rephrased as a complete sentence.

× Different aspects of life, for example signs is one of my favorite topic to write about.

✓ Different aspects of life; for example, signs are one of my favorite topics to write about.

The sentence has punctuation and agreement issues. 'Signs' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' and 'topics' plural. Also, a semicolon or period is needed before 'for example' and a comma after it.

× I also write about history or daily routine of mine.

✓ I also write about history or my daily routine.

'Daily routine' is singular and should be preceded by a possessive pronoun 'my' for clarity and correctness.

× I believe that things are I couldn't be changed because part of it is history, which is fixed and cannot be altered.

✓ I believe that things cannot be changed because part of it is history, which is fixed and cannot be altered.

The phrase 'things are I couldn't be changed' is ungrammatical and confusing. It should be corrected to 'things cannot be changed' to express the intended meaning clearly.

× The other belongs to science, which is demonstrated by the Santis already.

✓ The other belongs to science, which has already been demonstrated by the scientists.

'Santis' is likely a misspelling of 'scientists'. Also, the passive voice with 'has already been demonstrated' is more appropriate here.

× I would love to take note or write on my phone because it is really convenient for me to bring the phone to whenever wherever I want so that I can use only my phone but not a bunch of paper and. Pencil's.

✓ I would love to take notes or write on my phone because it is really convenient for me to bring the phone wherever I want so that I can use only my phone and not a bunch of paper and pencils.

'Take note' should be 'take notes' (plural). 'Bring the phone to whenever wherever' is incorrect; 'to' should be removed. 'Pencil's' is incorrect possessive form; it should be 'pencils'. Also, the sentence was fragmented and needed restructuring for clarity.