Writing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复词汇，并且注意时态和单复数的正确使用。

Ví dụ: No, I don't write a lot because I find it difficult to store written notes. Instead, I prefer using digital devices like computers, which are easier to use and organize my writing.

Gợi ý: 回答内容较为丰富，但表达不够流畅，存在语法错误和词汇使用不当。建议使用连词使句子更连贯，并注意单复数和冠词的正确使用。

Ví dụ: I like to write social media posts on different platforms because they allow me to share my hobbies and life with friends and family. Also, these platforms have a large audience and provide instant feedback.

Gợi ý: 回答中表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，明确表达观点，并使用适当的连接词。

Ví dụ: Yes, the things I write will change as I get older because my perspectives and experiences will be different. Moreover, social media has influenced my way of thinking.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不准确的问题，建议明确表达偏好，并使用正确的词汇和句子结构。

Ví dụ: I prefer typing rather than handwriting because with modern technology, it is easier to store and edit my writing on devices like smartphones and computers.

× No, I don't write a lot as I think writing is really difficult to store, so I prefer to using the digital digital things like the computer off owns it, makes it is rich, is really easier to use.

✓ No, I don't write a lot as I think writing is really difficult to store, so I prefer to use digital things like computers because they are rich and really easier to use.

动词后面接动名词时，介词to后应接动词原形，不能用动名词using。此处应为prefer to use，而不是prefer to using。

× No, I don't write a lot as I think writing is really difficult to store, so I prefer to using the digital digital things like the computer off owns it, makes it is rich, is really easier to use.

✓ No, I don't write a lot as I think writing is really difficult to store, so I prefer to use digital things like computers because they are rich and really easier to use.

digital things应为复数形式，且computer off owns it等表达不清，应改为computers。

× I like to write some social media post on the different platforms.

✓ I like to write some social media posts on different platforms.

post应为复数posts，因为表示多个帖子。

× I like to write some social media post on the different platforms.

✓ I like to write some social media posts on different platforms.

the different platforms中的定冠词the不合适，表示泛指时应去掉the。

× And it has a much more bigger audience.

✓ And it has a much bigger audience.

much和bigger不能同时使用，much用于修饰形容词的比较级时，不能加more。

× Also the instant feedbacks on this kind of social media.

✓ Also the instant feedback on this kind of social media.

feedback是不可数名词，不能用复数形式feedbacks。

× Yes, this instead I write would change as I'm getting older, the perspectives and experiences that I have experience, it would become much more different.

✓ Yes, the things I write would change as I'm getting older; the perspectives and experiences that I have experienced would become much different.

instead用法错误，应改为the things；have experience应为have experienced，动词需用过去分词形式。

× Yes, this instead I write would change as I'm getting older, the perspectives and experiences that I have experience, it would become much more different.

✓ Yes, the things I write would change as I'm getting older; the perspectives and experiences that I have experienced would become much different.

have experience应使用过去分词experienced，表示完成时态。

× it would become much more different.

✓ it would become much different.

different是比较级，前面用much即可，不需要more。

× What is more, the social media has helped me to change my mind.

✓ What is more, social media has helped me to change my mind.

social media通常作为不可数名词使用，不加定冠词the。

× I prefer typing their handwriting when I'm writing.

✓ I prefer typing to handwriting when I'm writing.

prefer后面接动名词时，比较两者应使用prefer A to B结构，不能用their。

× Now, as the development of all kind of technology, it is really easy to store and change the things that are right on the different devices such as smartphones and computers.

✓ Now, with the development of all kinds of technology, it is really easy to store and change the things that are written on different devices such as smartphones and computers.

as the development应改为with the development；all kind应为all kinds；right应为written，表示被写的内容；the different devices中the不合适，表示泛指应去掉。