Writing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is a bit repetitive and contains some grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'tax an assignment' and 'any other season that I have been taught'. Try to be more concise and clear. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid redundancy. For example, you can say: 'I don't write a lot, but I usually take notes during lectures or when I have assignments.'

Ví dụ: I don't write very often, but I usually take notes during lectures or when I have assignments to complete. This helps me remember important information.

Gợi ý: Your answer covers the question well but is a bit long and slightly repetitive ('daily notes' and 'daily day-to-day activities'). Try to use linking words like 'also' or 'in addition' to connect ideas and avoid redundancy. Also, be careful with sentence structure to improve clarity.

Ví dụ: I like to write daily notes about what I learn from my teachers and supervisor. In addition, I enjoy journaling about my daily activities and thoughts, which helps me reflect and remember important events.

Gợi ý: Your answer has several grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'old change' and 'taking down their nodes'. Try to use simpler and clearer sentences. Use linking words such as 'because' or 'as' to explain reasons. For example, 'Yes, I think my writing will change because I learn new things every day from my teachers and supervisor.'

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe the things I write will change because I gain new knowledge daily from my teachers and supervisor. Therefore, my notes and writing style will gradually improve over time.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes and incomplete sentences. Try to organize your ideas clearly, use linking words like 'however' or 'but' to compare handwriting and typing, and avoid redundancy. For example, 'I prefer handwriting because it is easier and has fewer errors, but typing can save time and energy.'

Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting because it feels easier and I make fewer mistakes. However, typing is faster and helps save time and energy, so both have their advantages.

× I usually write whenever I get some kind of tax an assignment as well as when I have to take some kind of note that are important to me and whenever I am in lecture or any other season that I have been taught.

✓ I usually write whenever I get some kind of task or assignment as well as when I have to take some kind of notes that are important to me and whenever I am in a lecture or any other session where I am being taught.

The word 'tax' is incorrect and should be 'task' (spelling error). 'Note' should be plural 'notes' to agree with 'some kind of'. 'Lecture' needs an article 'a' before it. 'Season' is incorrect; the correct word is 'session'. 'That I have been taught' is better expressed as 'where I am being taught' to fit the context.

× I like to write my daily notes and the things that I have been taught by my teachers and my supervisor, as well as I also like journaling about my daily day-to-day activities, what might have been going through my life, and other important notes that are essential for me in the future.

✓ I like to write my daily notes and the things that I have been taught by my teachers and my supervisor, as well as I also like journaling about my day-to-day activities, what might be going on in my life, and other important notes that are essential for me in the future.

The phrase 'daily day-to-day activities' is redundant; 'day-to-day activities' suffices. 'What might have been going through my life' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'what might be going on in my life' to express ongoing events.

× Yes, I think the things that I write old change is due to growing knowledge and other things that I am learning in my day-to-day activities from my supervisor and teachers.

✓ Yes, I think the things that I write will change due to growing knowledge and other things that I am learning in my day-to-day activities from my supervisor and teachers.

The word 'old' is a typo and should be 'will' to indicate future tense. 'Change is' is incorrect; it should be 'change' without 'is' to fit the sentence structure.

× I like taking down their nodes of different things so my writing hold gradually change. Eventually.

✓ I like taking down their notes on different things so my writing will gradually change eventually.

'Nodes' is incorrect; the correct word is 'notes'. 'Hold' is incorrect; it should be 'will' to indicate future tense. The sentence structure is improved by combining the last two sentences.

× I prefer handwriting rather than typing as handwriting is much more easier to do and in typing there can be some kind of error board.

✓ I prefer handwriting rather than typing as handwriting is much easier to do and in typing there can be some kind of error board.

The phrase 'much more easier' is incorrect; 'much easier' is correct because 'easier' is already comparative. 'Error board' is unclear; likely intended 'error rate' or 'errors' but as per instruction only grammar issues are corrected.

× When you are writing the ear are minimal and you can easily right but.

✓ When you are writing, the errors are minimal and you can easily write.

'Ear' is a typo for 'errors'. 'Right' is a typo for 'write'. The sentence was incomplete and needed correction for clarity and grammar.

× The typing is also better as it can help. Save your time and energy.

✓ Typing is also better as it can help save your time and energy.

The sentence was split incorrectly. 'Save your time and energy' should be part of the previous sentence. Also, 'The typing' should be 'Typing' for natural phrasing.