Writing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use simple, correct sentences and avoid redundancy.

Ví dụ: Yes, I write quite often because I enjoy expressing my thoughts on paper. For example, I keep a journal where I write about my daily experiences and feelings.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant and clear but could be improved by adding linking words and more specific details to make it more coherent and engaging.

Ví dụ: I like to write down my dreams because I often have vivid and interesting ones. For instance, last week I dreamt about flying over a city, which was quite exciting.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but contains unclear phrases and lacks specific supporting details. Try to clarify your ideas and provide reasons or examples to support your opinion.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe the things I write will change as I grow older because my interests and experiences will evolve. For example, I might write more about my career or family in the future.

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and lacks detail. Try to use correct tense and expand your answer with reasons or comparisons to make it more complete.

Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting when I write because it helps me concentrate better. However, I know some people prefer typing because it is faster and more convenient.

× I am not right allows and.

✓ I am not very good at writing.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. It lacks a proper verb and subject agreement, making it a sentence structure error. The corrected sentence clearly expresses the intended meaning using correct grammar and structure.

× I think.

✓ I think so.

The sentence 'I think.' is incomplete and sounds unnatural in this context. Adding 'so' completes the thought and makes the sentence grammatically correct and natural.

× I really want to have a hope it to write a lot.

✓ I really want to have hope to write a lot.

The original sentence contains unnecessary words and incorrect structure. 'Have a hope it' is incorrect; 'have hope' is the correct phrase. Removing 'it' and adjusting the sentence improves clarity and grammar.

× I like to write down my dreams because I really dream a lot during the sleep and I think my dreams are really interesting.

✓ I like to write down my dreams because I dream a lot during sleep and I think my dreams are really interesting.

The phrase 'during the sleep' is incorrect; 'during sleep' is the correct form. Also, 'dream a lot' is correct without 'really' for clarity. The verb form is correct, but the preposition and article usage needed correction.

× Yes, I think it will change because you're South will change as you grow older.

✓ Yes, I think it will change because your thoughts will change as you grow older.

'You're South' is a mishearing or typo for 'your thoughts'. The pronoun 'your' is possessive and correctly refers to 'thoughts'. Correcting this clarifies the meaning and fixes the pronoun error.

× I prefer handwriting when I was writing.

✓ I prefer handwriting when I write.

The original sentence incorrectly mixes present tense 'prefer' with past tense 'was writing'. To maintain tense consistency, 'was writing' should be changed to 'write' to match the present tense preference.

× And I know there are also people they prefer to tap.

✓ And I know there are also people who prefer to type.

The sentence is ungrammatical due to the redundant subject 'people they'. Also, 'tap' is incorrect in this context; 'type' is the correct verb for using a keyboard. The corrected sentence fixes these errors for clarity and grammar.