Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and a bit long. Try to be more concise and avoid redundancy. Also, ensure your sentences are grammatically correct and clear. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love flowers because they carry symbolic meanings. When I receive them, I feel lucky and appreciated, as they often represent friendliness and romance.

Gợi ý: Your answer is a bit vague and contains some grammatical errors. Try to be more specific and organise your ideas clearly using linking words. Avoid generalisations and provide clear reasons or examples.

Ví dụ: Yes, many girls I know love flowers because they appreciate their beauty. They often receive flowers from their partners, which makes them happy. I would also feel delighted to receive flowers from friends or loved ones.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but could be clearer and more structured. Use linking words to connect your ideas and correct minor grammatical mistakes. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'I would say'.

Ví dụ: Not really, because Hong Kong is a densely populated city with limited space for planting flowers or trees. Therefore, I mostly see artificial flowers in malls or public places.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good ideas but needs better grammar and clearer structure. Use linking words to connect your points and avoid informal language like 'yeah'. Also, be careful with singular/plural forms and prepositions.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of flowers because they are rare in Hong Kong. When I see flowers on the street, I usually photograph them. I especially like sunflowers and roses because of their beautiful appearance and pleasant scent.

Gợi ý: Your answer is repetitive and contains some awkward phrasing. Try to use more precise vocabulary and avoid repeating similar ideas. Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: Yes, sending flowers is common in my country. People often give flowers to express gratitude to their parents and to show love and affection to their partners.

× I love flowers a lot because they have a lot of symbolic meanings which I feel lucky when I get one from others and I feel the friendliness and also the romance from it.

✓ I love flowers a lot because they have a lot of symbolic meanings; I feel lucky when I get one from others, and I feel the friendliness and also the romance in it.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'from it' to express feelings derived from the flower. The correct preposition here is 'in' to indicate the feelings contained within or associated with the flower. Also, the sentence was a run-on and needed proper punctuation to separate ideas clearly.

× especially for the girls because they love aesthetic things and also they always receive flowers from maybe their partners and I always feel happy for them because it's the most beautiful thing in the world and I will be happy as well if I receive some flowers from lovers or friends.

✓ especially for girls because they love aesthetic things and also they always receive flowers from their partners, and I always feel happy for them because it's the most beautiful thing in the world. I will be happy as well if I receive some flowers from lovers or friends.

The phrase 'the girls' is unnecessarily specific; 'girls' is more appropriate here. Also, 'maybe their partners' is awkward; removing 'maybe' clarifies the meaning. The sentence was also a run-on and needed to be split for clarity.

× Not really, because Hong Kong is a very packed city I would say, and there's not much place for you to plant flowers or trees, so usually I can only see some artificial flowers and some plaster or malls.

✓ Not really, because Hong Kong is a very packed city, I would say, and there's not much place for you to plant flowers or trees, so usually I can only see some artificial flowers in plaster or malls.

The phrase 'some plaster or malls' is unclear and likely incorrect. It should be 'in plaster or malls' to indicate location. Possibly 'plaster' refers to 'plaster decorations' or 'plaster flowers', so the preposition 'in' is appropriate.

× And I love sunflowers and also rose a lot because there's of their smell and their beauty.

✓ And I love sunflowers and also roses a lot because of their smell and their beauty.

The word 'rose' should be plural 'roses' to match 'sunflowers' and because it refers to flowers in general. Also, 'there's of their smell' is incorrect; it should be 'because of their smell'. The phrase 'there's of' is ungrammatical.

× it's a very common thing because it's the way for you to show gratitude to your parents and also a way to accommodate your partners and also show love and affectionness to them.

✓ it's a very common thing because it's the way for you to show gratitude to your parents and also a way to appreciate your partners and show love and affection to them.

The word 'accommodate' is incorrectly used; the correct word is 'appreciate' to express showing gratitude or affection. Also, 'affectionness' is not a correct noun; the correct noun is 'affection'.