Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence clarity. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and correct grammar errors such as 'gives the nature a beauty' to 'gives nature beauty'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I really love flowers because they add beauty and freshness to nature. Therefore, I enjoy spending time in places where flowers grow.

Gợi ý: Avoid awkward phrasing and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent and correct singular/plural errors like 'flower' to 'flowers'.

Ví dụ: Yes, my wife loves flowers. When we were single, I often gave her many flowers because she enjoys them. She also likes to visit places full of flowers.

Gợi ý: Reduce filler words and improve sentence endings for clarity. Use linking words properly and avoid incomplete sentences. Also, explain the meaning of 'Hamisha Bahar' more clearly.

Ví dụ: I live in Jalalabad, Afghanistan, which is known as Hamisha Bahar, meaning 'evergreen' in my language. The city is full of flowers, and people love to grow them in parks.

Gợi ý: Avoid repetition and improve sentence flow by using linking words. Also, correct grammar such as 'a computer devices' to 'my computer'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of flowers. My phone and computer galleries are full of flower pictures, especially roses, which symbolize love.

Gợi ý: Try to avoid filler words and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct singular/plural errors such as 'red flower' to 'red flowers'.

Ví dụ: Yes, in our tradition, there is a special day called the Day of Love and Flowers. On this day, people send different kinds of flowers depending on their relationship. For example, spouses usually exchange red flowers.

× It gives the nature a beauty and freshness the air.

✓ It gives nature beauty and freshness to the air.

The definite article 'the' is incorrectly used before 'nature' and 'air'. In English, 'nature' and 'air' are uncountable nouns and generally do not require 'the' unless specifying something particular. Also, the phrase 'a beauty and freshness the air' is incorrect; it should be 'beauty and freshness to the air' to express the intended meaning.

× She really likes flower and every time she requests me to go somewhere full of love.

✓ She really likes flowers and every time she requests me to go somewhere full of flowers.

The noun 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' because it refers to flowers in general. Also, 'somewhere full of love' is likely a mistake; it should be 'somewhere full of flowers' to match the context of loving flowers.

× And to bring an example who is known by me to love flowers, I will mention you, my wife.

✓ To give an example of someone I know who loves flowers, I will mention my wife.

The original sentence is awkward and ungrammatical. The phrase 'who is known by me to love flowers' is incorrect; it should be 'someone I know who loves flowers'. Also, 'I will mention you, my wife' is incorrect because the speaker is referring to his wife, not the listener.

× In my native language, Hamisha Bahar means like, uh, green every time.

✓ In my native language, Hamisha Bahar means 'always green'.

The phrase 'means like, uh, green every time' is awkward and ungrammatical. The word 'like' is unnecessary, and 'green every time' should be expressed as 'always green' for clarity and correctness.

× and there are a lot of flowers where.

✓ and there are a lot of flowers there.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'where' which is incorrect. The correct word is 'there' to indicate the presence of many flowers in the location.

× If you check the gallery of my phone or a computer devices, they will be full of the photos of flowers, which I really like.

✓ If you check the gallery of my phone or computer devices, they will be full of photos of flowers, which I really like.

The phrase 'a computer devices' is incorrect because 'a' is singular and 'devices' is plural. It should be either 'a computer device' or 'computer devices'. Also, 'the photos of flowers' can be simplified to 'photos of flowers'.

× I really like roses, it's the sign for love.

✓ I really like roses; they're a sign of love.

The phrase 'it's the sign for love' is incorrect because 'roses' is plural, so the pronoun should be 'they're'. Also, 'a sign of love' is the correct expression, not 'the sign for love'.

× Like, uh, the, uh, spouses, they send each other red flower.

✓ Like, uh, spouses, they send each other red flowers.

The word 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' because spouses send multiple flowers. Also, the definite article 'the' before 'spouses' is unnecessary here.