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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you love flowers?

Thí sinh

Yes, I really love flowers. Sometimes I will buy some flowers to decorate my apartment which can help me relax and clear my mind.

Giám khảo

Do you know anyone who loves flowers?

Thí sinh

I just know my mom who really love flowers most of the time. She always buys some flowers back to their house and decorate umm, our house.

Giám khảo

Are there a lot of flowers where you live?

Thí sinh

No, where I live is the uh wedding ball flowers because in my apartment there is no enough space to plant umm more flowers. So just plant some a few flowers.

Giám khảo

Do you take photos of flowers in your daily life?

Thí sinh

No, umm, I just want to say I, I am a man so I don't like to take a photo of flowers to put the social media. I think it's a way of like umm, women behavior.

Giám khảo

Do people in your country often send flowers to others?

Thí sinh

Yes, of course. Especially during the UMM special festival day, people will buy some flowers to send others. Especially the Valentine's Day, the partners will send flowers to partners.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you love flowers?

Điểm: 80.0

Gợi ý: 回答较自然且内容相关,但句子结构稍显简单,且缺少连接词使表达更流畅。建议使用连接词如“because”或“so”来丰富句子结构,并适当增加细节。

Ví dụ: Yes, I really love flowers because they brighten up my apartment and help me relax after a long day.

Do you know anyone who loves flowers?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误(如动词单复数不一致),且表达不够流畅。建议注意主谓一致,减少口头语,并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, my mom loves flowers a lot. She often buys flowers to decorate our house, which makes the environment more pleasant.

Are there a lot of flowers where you live?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰,表达混乱且有语法错误。建议简化句子结构,避免重复和口头语,明确表达观点并使用连接词。

Ví dụ: No, there are not many flowers where I live because my apartment is small and doesn't have enough space for planting. I only have a few potted flowers.

Do you take photos of flowers in your daily life?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答带有性别刻板印象且表达不够自然,口头语较多。建议避免性别偏见,减少口头语,直接回答问题并给出合理理由。

Ví dụ: No, I usually don't take photos of flowers because I prefer capturing landscapes or city scenes instead.

Do people in your country often send flowers to others?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答内容相关但表达重复,且有语法错误。建议使用连接词避免重复,注意语法准确性,并丰富细节。

Ví dụ: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others, especially during special occasions like Valentine's Day, when partners exchange flowers as a symbol of love.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× I just know my mom who really love flowers most of the time.

I just know my mom who really loves flowers most of the time.

主语是单数的"my mom",谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式"loves",而不是复数形式"love"。

Singular and plural issue

× She always buys some flowers back to their house and decorate umm, our house.

She always buys some flowers back to their house and decorates umm, our house.

主语是单数的"She",谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式"decorates",而不是原形"decorate"。

Singular and plural issue

× So just plant some a few flowers.

So just plant a few flowers.

"some"和"a few"都表示数量,但不能同时使用,应选择其中一个。这里选择"a few"更合适。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× She always buys some flowers back to their house and decorate umm, our house.

She always buys some flowers back for their house and decorates umm, our house.

动词"buy"后面搭配的介词应为"for"表示买东西给某人,而不是"to"。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× She always buys some flowers back to their house and decorate umm, our house.

She always buys some flowers back to her house and decorates umm, our house.

"their house"指代不明确,前文提到的是"my mom",应使用单数所有格代词"her"。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I just know my mom who really love flowers most of the time.

I just know my mom who really loves flowers most of the time.

"who"指代单数"my mom",谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式"loves"。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× the partners will send flowers to partners.

The partners will send flowers to their partners.

句中第二个"partners"缺少所有格,需改为"their partners"以明确指代关系。

Singular and plural issue

× the partners will send flowers to partners.

The partners will send flowers to their partners.

"partners"前缺少所有格"their",使句子更明确且符合语法。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BackRear; Reverse; Backward
ClearUnderstandable; Obvious; Transparent; Bright; Unobstructed
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