Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you love flowers?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like the smells are that flowers bring to me. And flowers can always encourage my spirit.
Giám khảo
Do you know anyone who loves flowers?
Thí sinh
Yes, my mom was a huge fan of flowers and she always bought flowers like almost every day and she even bought books and washing the clothes how to. Plant flowers in the home.
Giám khảo
Are there a lot of flowers where you live?
Thí sinh
Not really because I live in the city that was surrounded by desert so there aren't many planet planets around us.
Giám khảo
Do you take photos of flowers in your daily life?
Thí sinh
Usually when I see some beautiful flowers I will take a photo, but not very often.
Giám khảo
Do people in your country often send flowers to others?
Thí sinh
Yes, but this situation mostly happened in the young people because it they said it's very romantic to send flowers to their couple.
Do you love flowers?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构,避免语法错误,并且用更自然的表达方式描述对花的喜爱。
Ví dụ: Yes, I love flowers because their fragrance is very refreshing. They always lift my mood and make me feel happy.
Do you know anyone who loves flowers?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答内容混乱,语法错误严重,表达不清晰。建议理清思路,使用简单句子表达母亲喜欢花,并具体说明她的行为。
Ví dụ: Yes, my mother loves flowers very much. She buys fresh flowers almost every day and reads books about how to take care of them at home.
Are there a lot of flowers where you live?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和重复词汇,表达不够准确。建议使用正确的时态和词汇,简洁明了地说明居住环境。
Ví dụ: Not really. I live in a city surrounded by desert, so there are not many plants or flowers nearby.
Do you take photos of flowers in your daily life?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答较为自然,但可以使用连接词使句子更流畅,同时丰富表达。
Ví dụ: Usually, when I see some beautiful flowers, I take photos of them; however, I don't do this very often.
Do people in your country often send flowers to others?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误和表达不清晰,建议理顺句子结构,使用正确的时态和词汇,明确说明年轻人送花的原因。
Ví dụ: Yes, people do send flowers, especially young people, because they think it is very romantic to give flowers to their partners.
× Yes, I like the smells are that flowers bring to me.
✓ Yes, I like the smells that flowers bring to me.
句子中“the smells are that”结构不正确,应该直接用“the smells that”来引导定语从句,修饰“smells”。
× she even bought books and washing the clothes how to.
✓ she even bought books on how to wash clothes.
“washing the clothes how to”语序错误,正确表达应为“books on how to wash clothes”,即“关于如何洗衣服的书”。
× Plant flowers in the home.
✓ She learned how to plant flowers at home.
该句缺少主语和谓语,且表达不完整,需补充主语和谓语,使句子完整通顺。
× there aren't many planet planets around us.
✓ there aren't many plants around us.
“planet planets”重复且错误,应为“plants”,表示“植物”。
× because it they said it's very romantic to send flowers to their couple.
✓ because they said it's very romantic to send flowers to their partners.
“it they”重复且错误,且“their couple”用法不当,改为“their partners”更合适,指代恋人。