Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时语法错误较多，表达不够自然。建议注意动词形式和介词的正确使用，同时避免重复词汇，使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: I don't really like flowers because they are difficult to take care of. Besides, I have allergies, so I prefer other decorations like paintings.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，句子结构不完整。建议使用正确的时态和主谓一致，避免重复，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, my grandmother loves planting different kinds of flowers. She has a garden full of flowers and spends a lot of time taking care of them. She says that doing this helps her feel recharged.

Gợi ý: 回答较为完整，但最后一句语法错误（flowers is应为flowers are）。建议注意主谓一致，并尝试使用更多连接词使表达更自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several flower gardens and parks near where I live. Many flowers bloom in different seasons, which helps people relax and feel peaceful. Therefore, flowers are very important in our daily life.

Gợi ý: 时态使用不当，表达不够自然。建议统一时态，简化表达，并使用合适的连接词。

Ví dụ: Whenever I go for a walk or jog, I take pictures of flowers to capture their beauty and details. This hobby helps me relax, and sometimes I share the photos on my social media with friends.

Gợi ý: 回答内容较好，但部分表达不够准确，如“some special event standing”不清楚。建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构。

Ví dụ: Absolutely. In China, people often send flowers as gifts, especially on birthdays or special occasions. Sending flowers is a way to show love and appreciation. Also, there are many flower shops near my home, making it convenient to buy flowers.

× Oh well I don't really into flowers, I think they're hard to take care and so I would prefer to other other decorations like some paintings and also I have allergies so flowers are not very suit for me.

✓ Oh well, I don't really like flowers, I think they're hard to take care of and so I would prefer other decorations like some paintings. Also, I have allergies so flowers are not very suitable for me.

句中'don't really into'缺少动词，正确表达应为'don't really like'，'take care'后应加介词'of'，'prefer to other other decorations'中多余重复且用法错误，应为'prefer other decorations'，'not very suit for me'中'suit'应为形容词'suitable'。这些都是动词+ing形式和介词使用错误。

× Yes, my grandmother, she like to planning different kinds of flowers.

✓ Yes, my grandmother, she likes to plan different kinds of flowers.

主语是第三人称单数，动词应加-s，'like'应为'likes'，'planning'应为动词原形'plan'，因为动词后接动名词或不定式需根据语境选择。

× She has a garden with whole of flowers.

✓ She has a garden with a whole lot of flowers.

'whole of flowers'用法不正确，应该用'a whole lot of flowers'表示大量的花。

× She she spent a lot of time take care of them.

✓ She spent a lot of time taking care of them.

'spend time'后应接动名词形式，'take care'应改为'taking care'。

× But she said every time when she do this kind of job, she thinks she recharged herself.

✓ But she said every time when she does this kind of job, she thinks she recharges herself.

主语是第三人称单数，动词应加-s，'do'应为'does'，'recharged'应为一般现在时'recharges'，因为描述习惯性动作。

× So flowers is very important in our daily life.

✓ So flowers are very important in our daily life.

主语'flowers'为复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式'are'。

× Every time when I was having a work or jog, I will capture down the picture of the flowers, recall down their beauties and details.

✓ Every time when I am working or jogging, I capture pictures of the flowers and recall their beauty and details.

时态混乱，'was having a work or jog'不正确，应为'working or jogging'，'will capture'应为一般现在时'capture'，因为描述习惯动作。

× I will capture down the picture of the flowers, recall down their beauties and details.

✓ I will capture pictures of the flowers and recall their beauty and details.

'capture down'和'recall down'中'down'用法错误，应去掉。

× It's kind of hobby which made me feel relaxed and I sometimes upload them to my social media platforms which can share it to my friends.

✓ It's a kind of hobby that makes me feel relaxed and I sometimes upload the photos to my social media platforms to share with my friends.

'which made'时态错误，应为'makes'，'which can share it to my friends'结构不正确，应改为'to share with my friends'。

× Especially during someone's birthday or some special event standing.

✓ Especially during someone's birthday or some special event.

'event standing'用法错误，'standing'多余，应去掉。

× Sending flowers can show their love and appreciation.

✓ Sending flowers can show one's love and appreciation.

'their'指代不明确，改为'one's'更合适，表示一般人。

× Also, there are a lot of flower shops near where I live, so it's very convenient for people to buy it.

✓ Also, there are a lot of flower shops near where I live, so it's very convenient for people to buy flowers.

'buy it'中'it'指代不明，应明确为'buy flowers'。