Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo
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Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you love flowers?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do love flowers. Umm, roses are my absolute favorite. Uh, I generally love flowers which are more vibrant in color. Uh, that is one of the reasons why I love uh, red roses and I even like orchids, uh, the Violet orchids, umm, So yes, I do love flowers.
Giám khảo
Do you know anyone who loves flowers?
Thí sinh
Yes, my mother is also very fond. Fond of flowers. Umm, that is one of the reasons why she has a lot of flowers in her garden. Uh, she's very fond of gardening as well. Umm, she likes uh, the flowers Lily.
Giám khảo
Are there a lot of flowers where you live?
Thí sinh
There's a garden right next to my apartment building. So, uh, yes, there are a lot of flowers in these garden. Umm, I really like to, umm, spend some time in this garden, uh, as it has a lot of vibrant and beautiful flowers. Uh, it is absolutely relaxing and beautiful.
Giám khảo
Do you take photos of flowers in your daily life?
Thí sinh
Yes, sometimes I do take pictures of these flowers. Although I must admit that I am no photographer and my pictures are not that great. I like to take pictures of the vibrant flowers, like ones with bright Violet and red colors.
Giám khảo
Do people in your country often send flowers to others?
Thí sinh
No, not very often. Uh, people in my country don't generally send flowers to people. Uh, but nowadays the younger generation has started sending flowers to each other, especially on birthdays and on Valentine's Day. So it is a new culture that is coming up.
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Part 1
Do you love flowers?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Try to avoid filler words like 'umm' and 'uh' to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, organise your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by specific supporting details using linking words to improve coherence.
Ví dụ: Yes, I love flowers, especially vibrant ones. For example, red roses are my absolute favorite because of their rich color. Additionally, I like violet orchids due to their unique appearance.
Do you know anyone who loves flowers?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Avoid repeating phrases and filler words. Combine related ideas into complete sentences and use linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural.
Ví dụ: Yes, my mother loves flowers and gardening. She has many flowers in her garden, especially lilies, which she likes a lot.
Are there a lot of flowers where you live?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Reduce the use of filler words and combine sentences to avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide specific details.
Ví dụ: Yes, there is a garden next to my apartment building that has many vibrant and beautiful flowers. I enjoy spending time there because it is very relaxing.
Do you take photos of flowers in your daily life?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: Your answer is clear but can be improved by linking sentences and avoiding unnecessary self-criticism. Provide more specific details about when or why you take photos.
Ví dụ: Yes, I sometimes take photos of flowers, especially those with bright violet and red colors. Although I am not a professional photographer, I enjoy capturing their beauty during my walks.
Do people in your country often send flowers to others?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: Good content and structure. To improve, avoid filler words and combine sentences using linking words for better flow and coherence.
Ví dụ: No, people in my country do not often send flowers. However, the younger generation has started this trend, especially on occasions like birthdays and Valentine's Day, making it a new emerging culture.
Ngữ pháp
× she likes uh, the flowers Lily.
✓ she likes uh, the flower Lily.
The word 'flowers' is plural, but 'Lily' refers to a singular flower. Therefore, the correct form is 'the flower Lily' to maintain singular and plural agreement.
× there are a lot of flowers in these garden.
✓ there are a lot of flowers in this garden.
The demonstrative pronoun 'these' is used for plural nouns, but 'garden' is singular. The correct demonstrative pronoun for a singular noun is 'this', so it should be 'this garden'.
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