Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it could be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating similar ideas and try to use linking words to connect your points smoothly. Also, try to vary your vocabulary a bit more.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love flowers. I often buy and plant them at home, especially on special occasions like my birthday.

Gợi ý: There are some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing here. For example, 'plunge' should be 'plants'. Also, try to use linking words to connect your reasons and be more specific about why she likes those flowers.

Ví dụ: Yes, my mother loves flowers. She often plants roses and jasmine at home because she enjoys their fragrance, vibrant colours, and delicate petals.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some vocabulary and grammar mistakes, such as 'deserted' instead of 'desert' and repetition of 'around'. Try to be more precise and use linking words to contrast ideas clearly.

Ví dụ: I live in a desert area, so there aren't many flowers. However, there are plenty of desert plants like palm trees around our house.

Gợi ý: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to explain your reasons. Also, avoid redundancy.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of flowers on my phone because it helps me capture and remember moments from my daily life.

Gợi ý: There are several grammar and vocabulary errors, such as 'sense' instead of 'send' and awkward phrasing. Try to organise your answer more clearly using linking words and be more specific about occasions and reasons.

Ví dụ: Yes, people in my country often send flowers as gifts on birthdays, anniversaries, and Valentine's Day to express their love and affection.

× She always plunge roses and Jasmine in our house because she loved the smell of it and the color and also their petals.

✓ She always plants roses and Jasmine in our house because she loves the smell of them and the colour and also their petals.

The verb 'plunge' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'plant' in the third person singular form 'plants' to agree with the subject 'She'. Also, 'loved' should be 'loves' to maintain present tense consistency. 'It' should be 'them' to correctly refer to plural nouns 'roses and Jasmine'. 'Color' is corrected to British English spelling 'colour'.

× The region where I live doesn't have that much flower because it's a deserted area, but it has a lot of deserted plants around the around our house like palm trees and also other trees.

✓ The region where I live doesn't have that many flowers because it's a deserted area, but it has a lot of desert plants around our house like palm trees and other trees.

'Much flower' is incorrect; 'many flowers' is correct for countable plural nouns. 'Deserted plants' is incorrect; the correct term is 'desert plants' meaning plants that grow in deserts. Also, the phrase 'around the around our house' has a repetition error; corrected to 'around our house'.

× Yes, I enjoy taking photo of the flowers on my phone because I think so that record and taking these photos are a type of recording my lifestyle.

✓ Yes, I enjoy taking photos of the flowers on my phone because I think that recording and taking these photos is a way of documenting my lifestyle.

'Taking photo' should be 'taking photos' as 'photo' is countable and plural is needed here. The phrase 'I think so that record and taking these photos are a type of recording my lifestyle' is awkward and ungrammatical; corrected to 'I think that recording and taking these photos is a way of documenting my lifestyle' for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× People in my country often sense flower as a birthday gift or on some important days.

✓ People in my country often send flowers as birthday gifts or on some important days.

'Sense flower' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'send' and 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' as gifts are usually multiple. Also, 'a birthday gift' is changed to plural 'birthday gifts' to match plural 'flowers'.

× For example on an anniversary or on the Valentine's Day they used to.

✓ For example, on an anniversary or on Valentine's Day, they usually do.

The sentence is incomplete and awkward. 'They used to' is unclear without an object or verb. Corrected to 'they usually do' to imply the action of sending flowers. Also, 'the Valentine's Day' is corrected to 'Valentine's Day' without 'the'. Commas added for clarity.

× They send flowers to other to the people they love to express a type of love.

✓ They send flowers to other people they love to express their love.

The phrase 'to other to the people' is incorrect and redundant. Corrected to 'to other people'. Also, 'a type of love' is vague; 'their love' is clearer and more natural.