Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by avoiding unclear phrases like "I'd alert the flowers." Also, keep your sentences concise and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love flowers, especially roses and jasmine. They help me relax and brighten my mood. Whenever I see them, I feel very happy.

Gợi ý: Avoid hesitation and repetition to make your answer more fluent. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas and provide clear supporting details.

Ví dụ: Yes, my sister Perpreet loves flowers, especially roses. On her special occasions, I usually give her a bunch of roses to make her happy.

Gợi ý: Try to use simpler and clearer sentences. Use linking words like "because" or "so" correctly to connect your ideas. Also, avoid awkward phrases like "multifarious flowers" and instead use more common vocabulary.

Ví dụ: I live near the mountains, so there are many different kinds of flowers grown by the local council. Their pleasant fragrance helps me relax and improves my mood.

Gợi ý: Reduce hesitation and filler words to improve fluency. Use linking words like "but" and "also" to connect ideas. Make your sentences more concise and clear.

Ví dụ: No, I don't take photos of flowers every day because I have a busy schedule. However, on special occasions, I like to take pictures of roses. Also, I usually clean my garden and plant new flowers on weekends.

Gợi ý: Avoid grammatical errors and incomplete sentences. Use linking words like "for example" and "also" properly. Provide specific and complete supporting details.

Ví dụ: Yes, in my country, people often send flowers to their loved ones on special occasions such as birthdays, anniversaries, and weddings. They also give flowers during festivals like Diwali and Holi to express their love and good wishes.

× They're distinct type of flowers like roses, Jasmine, etcetera that I like it because it helps to relax my mind and whenever I see the flowers then I feel over the moon.

✓ They're distinct types of flowers like roses, jasmine, etc., that I like because they help to relax my mind and whenever I see the flowers, I feel over the moon.

The phrase 'distinct type' should be plural 'distinct types' to agree with the plural noun 'flowers'. Also, 'I like it' is incorrect because 'it' is unnecessary and causes redundancy; 'I like' suffices. 'It helps' should be 'they help' to agree with the plural subject 'flowers'. Additionally, commas are needed for clarity.

× Well, my sister, named as Perpreet Kaur, liked the flower very much.

✓ Well, my sister, named Perpreet Kaur, likes flowers very much.

The verb 'liked' is in past tense but the context suggests a present habit or preference, so 'likes' in present tense is appropriate. Also, 'named as' is incorrect; it should be 'named' or 'called'. 'The flower' should be plural 'flowers' to generalize the preference.

× Well, uh, her favorite flower is roses, and on her special occasion, I usually give her, uh, give, uh, give her a bunch of roses.

✓ Well, uh, her favorite flowers are roses, and on her special occasions, I usually give her a bunch of roses.

'Favorite flower is roses' mixes singular and plural; it should be 'favorite flowers are roses' to agree in number. 'Special occasion' should be plural 'special occasions' to match the habitual action described.

× To be honest, as I live near to the mountain so there are multifarious flowers that usually grown by the council and their fragrance is very elegant and which helps to relax my mind and also brighten my mood.

✓ To be honest, as I live near the mountain, there are multifarious flowers that are usually grown by the council, and their fragrance is very elegant, which helps to relax my mind and also brighten my mood.

The preposition 'near to' is incorrect; it should be 'near'. The phrase 'usually grown' needs the auxiliary verb 'are' to form the passive voice. Commas are added for clarity and to separate clauses properly.

× Uh, no, uh, as I have a active schedule, so I don't take a photo of flower daily, but on special occasion I like to, uh, click some picture with roses.

✓ Uh, no, uh, as I have an active schedule, I don't take photos of flowers daily, but on special occasions, I like to click some pictures with roses.

'A active' should be 'an active' because 'active' starts with a vowel sound. 'A photo of flower' is incorrect; it should be plural 'photos of flowers' to generalize. 'On special occasion' should be plural 'on special occasions'. 'Click some picture' should be 'click some pictures' for correct quantification.

× Uh, apart from this, on the weekend I usually, uh, clean my garden and grow some new.

✓ Uh, apart from this, on the weekend I usually clean my garden and grow some new plants.

The phrase 'grow some new' is incomplete; it needs a plural noun like 'plants' to complete the meaning.

× Yeah, of course, as I in my country, most of the people like to send the flowers to their near and dear ones, for example on their birthday party and Mary's anniversary on the wedding day.

✓ Yeah, of course, in my country, most people like to send flowers to their near and dear ones, for example on their birthday parties and wedding anniversaries.

The phrase 'as I in my country' is incorrect; 'in my country' suffices. 'Most of the people' is better as 'most people'. 'Send the flowers' should be 'send flowers' without 'the' for generalization. 'Birthday party' and 'Mary's anniversary on the wedding day' are awkward; better to say 'birthday parties and wedding anniversaries'.

× Apart from this, on some festival like Diwali, Holi, they usually give the flower to express their feeling of love and.

✓ Apart from this, on some festivals like Diwali and Holi, they usually give flowers to express their feelings of love.

'On some festival' should be plural 'on some festivals'. 'Like Diwali, Holi' needs 'and' to connect the items. 'Give the flower' should be 'give flowers' for generalization. 'Feeling' should be plural 'feelings'. The sentence was incomplete and needed proper ending.