Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时应避免语法错误，如“advantages for flower”应为“advantages of flowers”。句子结构可以更自然流畅，避免重复表达。建议使用连接词使回答更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I love flowers because they brighten up my home and improve my mood. For instance, I often give flowers to friends during special occasions like promotions or anniversaries.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误，如“fresh hours”应为“fresh flowers”。句子衔接不够自然，建议使用连接词并注意时态一致。

Ví dụ: Yes, my friend Milan really loves flowers. She likes to have fresh flowers at home every day because they help her relax. Therefore, she often buys different kinds, like roses and tulips, to decorate her house.

Gợi ý: 回答较为自然，但可以增加连接词使句子更流畅。建议丰富细节，说明为什么难以养活花。

Ví dụ: I love flowers and wish to have many around me, but I find it hard to keep them alive because I don't have much experience in gardening. As a result, there aren't many flowers where I live. However, I plan to learn how to take better care of them in the future.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误，如“take photo”应为“take photos”。句子结构略显重复，建议使用连接词并简化表达。

Ví dụ: Yes, I love taking photos of flowers, especially in spring when most flowers bloom and the scenery is beautiful. I often take out my phone to capture these moments.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法和表达不自然的问题，如“in their ceremony”不明确。建议使用更准确的词汇和连接词，使表达更清晰。

Ví dụ: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others. For example, flowers are commonly given to congratulate someone on a promotion. Also, spouses or partners exchange flowers during special ceremonies as a symbol of love and appreciation.

× There are a lot of advantages for flower.

✓ There are a lot of advantages for flowers.

flower 是可数名词，表示复数时应使用 flowers。此处表示多种花的优点，需用复数形式。

× I would like to share flowers when in the special occasions, especially promotions or anniversaries.

✓ I would like to share flowers on special occasions, especially promotions or anniversaries.

介词搭配错误，表示“在某些场合”应使用 on special occasions，而不是 when in the special occasions。

× She needs to have fresh hours at home every day because flowers made her feel relaxed.

✓ She needs to have fresh flowers at home every day because flowers make her feel relaxed.

hours 是“小时”，应为 flowers（花）。另外，主语 flowers 是复数，谓语动词应用 make 而非 made。

× flowers made her feel relaxed.

✓ flowers make her feel relaxed.

句子描述的是习惯性动作，应用一般现在时，故 made 应改为 make。

× So usually afterwards she will buy different flowers such as roses or tulips to decorate her house.

✓ So usually, afterwards, she will buy different flowers such as roses or tulips to decorate her house.

句中副词顺序不当，通常用逗号分隔以使句子更通顺。

× I would love to take photo of flowers especially in the spring because spring is the season and most flowers will bloom and the scenery is very beautiful.

✓ I would love to take photos of flowers especially in the spring because spring is the season and most flowers will bloom and the scenery is very beautiful.

photo 是可数名词，表示多张照片时应使用复数 photos。

× I can't help to take out my phone to take photos.

✓ I can't help taking out my phone to take photos.

短语 can't help 后应接动名词形式，不能接不定式 to take。