FlowersPart 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you love flowers?

Thí sinh

Yeah, definitely. I do love sunflowers. It may not have too much to do with the meaning of the flowers. I prefer the vitality of the sunflower which it always look up to the sun.

Giám khảo

Do you know anyone who loves flowers?

Thí sinh

Most people around me like flowers very much and the example I suppose is myself. I really like flowers and I always buy them to direct my house which makes me feel enjoyable.

Giám khảo

Are there a lot of flowers where you live?

Thí sinh

Yeah, definitely. I can observe many landscape flowers around where I live and thanks to these flowers, let me feel enjoyable and less tired after a whole day walk.

Giám khảo

Do you take photos of flowers in your daily life?

Thí sinh

Yes, definitely. I do like taking photos of flowers in my daily life because I love recording the good things which happened in my daily life. So when I watching the photos again I feel so happy.

Giám khảo

Do people in your country often send flowers to others?

Thí sinh

Yeah, definitely. People in our country often send flowers to others because flowers always have good meanings. We are willing to send our good meanings to others.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you love flowers?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答中语法和表达存在错误,且句子结构不够自然。建议注意主谓一致和时态使用,避免重复表达。可以用更自然的表达方式描述喜欢向日葵的原因。

Ví dụ: Yes, I love flowers, especially sunflowers. I admire their vibrant appearance and how they always turn towards the sun, which symbolizes positivity and energy.

Do you know anyone who loves flowers?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答中表达不够清晰,'direct my house'用词错误,应为'decorate my house'。建议使用更准确的词汇,并简洁明了地表达观点。

Ví dụ: Yes, many people I know love flowers, including myself. I often buy flowers to decorate my house because they make me feel happy.

Are there a lot of flowers where you live?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 句子结构不完整,表达不够流畅。建议使用完整句子,注意语法和连贯性,避免直译。

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many beautiful flowers in my neighborhood. Seeing them helps me relax and feel refreshed after a long walk.

Do you take photos of flowers in your daily life?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如'when I watching'应为'when I watch'。建议注意时态和动词形式,表达更自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of flowers because I enjoy capturing beautiful moments. Looking at these photos later always makes me happy.

Do people in your country often send flowers to others?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答表达较为简单,建议丰富内容,使用更地道的表达方式,避免重复。

Ví dụ: Yes, sending flowers is a common practice in my country. People often give flowers to express good wishes and celebrate special occasions.

Ngữ pháp

Verb in the present participle form

× I prefer the vitality of the sunflower which it always look up to the sun.

I prefer the vitality of the sunflower which always looks up to the sun.

句中主语是单数的'sunflower',谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式'looks',而不是'look'。此外,'which it'中的'it'多余,应去掉。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I always buy them to direct my house which makes me feel enjoyable.

I always buy them to decorate my house which makes me feel happy.

动词'direct'用错,应为'decorate'表示装饰。'feel enjoyable'表达不当,'enjoyable'是形容词,通常用来形容事物,表达感受时应使用'happy'。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I can observe many landscape flowers around where I live and thanks to these flowers, let me feel enjoyable and less tired after a whole day walk.

I can see many landscape flowers around where I live, and thanks to these flowers, I feel happy and less tired after a whole day’s walk.

'observe'用词不当,日常表达中用'see'更自然。'let me feel enjoyable'结构错误,应改为'I feel happy'。'a whole day walk'缺少所有格,应为'a whole day’s walk'。

Present tense issue

× So when I watching the photos again I feel so happy.

So when I watch the photos again, I feel so happy.

'when'引导的时间状语从句中,谓语动词应使用一般现在时,'watching'应改为'watch'。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× We are willing to send our good meanings to others.

We are willing to send good wishes to others.

'meanings'用词不当,表达祝福应使用'wishes'。'our good meanings'不符合英语习惯,应改为'good wishes'。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
HappyCheerful; Glad; Fortunate
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
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