Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. For example, 'it's so sober' is unclear and 'sign of Peach' should be 'sign of peace'. Try to use simpler and correct expressions to sound more natural. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating the same idea.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love flowers, especially roses because they are very beautiful and symbolize peace. That's why roses are my favorite.

Gợi ý: Your answer repeats ideas and has grammatical mistakes like 'who loves' instead of 'who love' and 'sign of Peach' instead of 'sign of peace'. Try to be more specific and avoid repeating the same points. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, many people I know love flowers because they are beautiful and symbolize peace. For example, my mother often grows flowers in our garden.

Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and unclear. Phrases like 'there is not at all' and 'We can see most goes' do not make sense. Try to organize your answer clearly and use correct vocabulary. Be specific about the availability of flowers in your area.

Ví dụ: There are not many flowers where I live, but some kinds can be found occasionally in gardens or parks nearby.

Gợi ý: Your answer is good but a bit repetitive. Try to combine sentences and use linking words to make it more fluent. Also, use singular or plural forms correctly, for example, 'a flower' and 'take a photo of it'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love flowers and often take photos of them whenever I see beautiful ones during my daily activities.

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by using better sentence structure and vocabulary. For example, say 'on special occasions' instead of 'if there is coming special day'. Also, avoid repeating 'special person' twice.

Ví dụ: Yes, many people in my country send flowers to their relatives or loved ones on special occasions like birthdays or anniversaries.

× Especially I love rose because rose is very beautiful and it's so sober and it's a sign of Peach.

✓ Especially I love roses because roses are very beautiful and they are so sober and they are a sign of peace.

The word 'rose' should be plural 'roses' when talking generally. Also, 'Peach' is a misspelling of 'peace'. The verb 'is' should be 'are' to agree with the plural subject 'roses'.

× For this reason, I love most rose.

✓ For this reason, I love roses the most.

'Rose' should be plural 'roses' to refer generally. The phrase 'love most rose' is incorrect; it should be 'love roses the most' to express preference clearly.

× Yes, I know a lot of people who loves flowers because I think everybody loves flowers and it's so sign of Peach and it's really beautiful and lovely.

✓ Yes, I know a lot of people who love flowers because I think everybody loves flowers and it's a sign of peace and it's really beautiful and lovely.

The relative clause 'who loves flowers' should use 'love' to agree with the plural antecedent 'people'. 'It's so sign of Peach' is incorrect; it should be 'it's a sign of peace'.

× Actually there is not at all, but there are many kinds of flowers where I live, but it's very rare.

✓ Actually, there are none at all, but there are many kinds of flowers where I live, although they are very rare.

'There is not at all' is incorrect; 'there are none at all' is appropriate for plural 'flowers'. 'It's very rare' should be 'they are very rare' to agree with plural 'flowers'.

× We can see most goes.

✓ We can see most of the roses.

'Most goes' is incorrect; likely intended 'most roses'. The word 'goes' is incorrect here; 'roses' fits the context.

× And if I see a flower then obviously I take a photo of them.

✓ And if I see a flower, then obviously I take a photo of it.

'A flower' is singular, so the pronoun should be singular 'it' instead of plural 'them'.

× If there is coming special day, they send flowers to their special person.

✓ If there is a special day coming, they send flowers to their special person.

The phrase 'there is coming special day' is incorrect; it should be 'there is a special day coming' to use the article 'a' and correct word order.