Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you love flowers?
Thí sinh
Yes, definitely. I'm passionate about flowers, mainly because the flowers is very beautiful and it can bring me a lot of joy, love and sweetness.
Giám khảo
Do you know anyone who loves flowers?
Thí sinh
Well, in my opinion, my grandmother is passionate about flowers. To be specific, she has a big yard full of flowers such as roses, Lotus and other flowers.
Giám khảo
Are there a lot of flowers where you live?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course there are various flowers in my balconies and my mother and father will protect and service these flowers every day. It takes a lot of time to watering them.
Giám khảo
Do you take photos of flowers in your daily life?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course, I often go to the forest gardens with my best friends and near the lake. We would like to take a lot of photos with the flowers together. In my opinions, I think it is a good way for us.
Giám khảo
Do people in your country often send flowers to others?
Thí sinh
Yes, definitely. People in my country often send flowers to each other, especially in some special holidays such as Mother's Day. Daughters and sons will buy lots of flowers such as roses for their mother.
Do you love flowers?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了热爱花卉的情感,但存在语法错误(如“the flowers is”应为“the flowers are”),且表达略显重复。建议注意主谓一致,避免重复表达,并尝试用更自然的表达方式。
Ví dụ: Yes, I love flowers very much because they are beautiful and always bring me happiness and a sense of peace.
Do you know anyone who loves flowers?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答结构清晰,但“in my opinion”在此处使用不太自然,且“Lotus”应为复数形式“lotuses”。建议避免不必要的表达,注意名词复数形式,并丰富细节。
Ví dụ: My grandmother loves flowers a lot. She has a large garden filled with roses, lotuses, and many other colorful flowers.
Are there a lot of flowers where you live?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如“in my balconies”应为“on my balcony”,“service”用词不当,且“to watering”应为“to water”。建议注意介词使用和动词形式,表达更准确自然。
Ví dụ: Yes, there are many flowers on my balcony. My parents take care of them every day, which requires a lot of time for watering and maintenance.
Do you take photos of flowers in your daily life?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答表达了拍摄花卉的习惯,但“forest gardens”表达不够自然,“in my opinions”应为“in my opinion”,且句子结构略显重复。建议使用更地道的表达,避免重复。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often visit botanical gardens and lakesides with my best friends to take photos of flowers. I think it's a wonderful way to enjoy nature together.
Do people in your country often send flowers to others?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 回答内容完整且表达清晰,但“such as roses”后可加更多细节,且句子可以更流畅。建议丰富细节并使用连接词使表达更自然。
Ví dụ: Yes, people in my country frequently send flowers to loved ones, especially on special occasions like Mother's Day. For example, children often buy roses and other beautiful flowers to show their appreciation to their mothers.
× I'm passionate about flowers, mainly because the flowers is very beautiful and it can bring me a lot of joy, love and sweetness.
✓ I'm passionate about flowers, mainly because the flowers are very beautiful and they can bring me a lot of joy, love and sweetness.
这里的主语是复数名词“flowers”,谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”,代词也应使用复数形式“they”。
× It takes a lot of time to watering them.
✓ It takes a lot of time to water them.
动词不定式to后应接动词原形,不能用动名词形式“watering”。
× Yes, of course there are various flowers in my balconies and my mother and father will protect and service these flowers every day.
✓ Yes, of course there are various flowers on my balconies and my mother and father will protect and service these flowers every day.
表示位置时,阳台应使用介词“on”而不是“in”。
× We would like to take a lot of photos with the flowers together.
✓ We would like to take a lot of photos of the flowers together.
拍摄照片时,应该用“take photos of something”,而不是“with”。
× In my opinions, I think it is a good way for us.
✓ In my opinion, I think it is a good way for us.
“opinion”是不可数名词,不能用复数形式“opinions”。
× People in my country often send flowers to each other, especially in some special holidays such as Mother's Day.
✓ People in my country often send flowers to each other, especially on some special holidays such as Mother's Day.
表示特定时间点应使用介词“on”而不是“in”。