Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答自然且表达了喜爱花卉的情感，但存在语法错误（如"it make me"应为"it makes me"），且句子稍显冗长。建议注意主谓一致，简洁表达。

Ví dụ: Yes, I love flowers, especially roses and jasmine. They bring me peace and make me feel refreshed and energetic.

Gợi ý: 回答内容丰富，但句子结构不够连贯，缺少适当的连接词。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，同时注意名词复数形式（如"rose"应为"roses"）。

Ví dụ: My grandma loves flowers and has a small garden where she plants many flowers like roses and jasmine. Last summer, she even dug a small pond to grow lotus flowers.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在重复和表达不清的问题（"who is who likes"），且"life space"用词不当。建议简化句子，使用更准确的词汇。

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many flowers where I live because an old man in my community loves planting them.

Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点，但句子结构不够连贯，存在语法错误和重复。建议合并句子，使用连接词，使表达更自然。

Ví dụ: Honestly, I hardly ever take photos of flowers because I don't like taking photos in general. I prefer to remember things with my eyes.

Gợi ý: 回答内容明确，但存在语法错误（"flower are"应为"flowers are"），且"a branch of flowers"用词不当。建议注意复数形式和更自然的表达。

Ví dụ: Yes, flowers are a popular gift. People often send flowers to express gratitude or love, especially among young people.

× I almost love all kinds of flowers, especially rose and Jasmine.

✓ I almost love all kinds of flowers, especially roses and jasmine.

这里“rose”和“Jasmine”指的是花的种类，应该使用复数形式“roses”和“jasmine”（jasmine作为不可数名词或复数形式不变）来表示多种花。

× They give me a sense of peace and satisfaction and it make me feel refreshed and energetic.

✓ They give me a sense of peace and satisfaction and it makes me feel refreshed and energetic.

主语“it”是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s，改为“makes”。

× she plants a lot of flowers like rose, Jasmine and last summer she even dug a small pond to plant Lotus.

✓ she plants a lot of flowers like roses, jasmine and last summer she even dug a small pond to plant lotus.

“rose”和“Lotus”应使用复数形式“roses”和“lotus”，表示多种花。

× Oh yes, in my community there is an old man who is who likes planting flowers.

✓ Oh yes, in my community there is an old man who likes planting flowers.

句子中多余的“who is”导致结构错误，应删除。

× So there are many flowers in my life space.

✓ So there are many flowers in my living space.

“life space”表达不自然，正确表达应为“living space”。

× Honestly I hardly ever take photos of them although I love flowers but because I don't really like taking photos.

✓ Honestly, I hardly ever take photos of them although I love flowers because I don't really like taking photos.

句中“although”和“but”连用导致结构混乱，应去掉“but”。

× Yes, because flower are a great gift.

✓ Yes, because flowers are a great gift.

“flower”应使用复数形式“flowers”，主谓一致。

× I think people always send a branch of flowers to express their gratitude or love, but this phenomenon is mainly among young people.

✓ I think people always send a bunch of flowers to express their gratitude or love, but this phenomenon is mainly among young people.

“a branch of flowers”不常用，通常用“a bunch of flowers”表示一束花。