Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: คำตอบของคุณมีคำผิดและใช้คำศัพท์ไม่ถูกต้อง เช่น 'fiber' แทน 'flowers' และ 'fish flower' ที่ไม่ชัดเจน ควรใช้คำที่ถูกต้องและชัดเจน รวมถึงโครงสร้างประโยคควรเรียบง่ายและสื่อความหมายได้ชัดเจนมากขึ้น

Ví dụ: Yes, I love flowers because they are beautiful and add color to any room. For example, I enjoy having fresh flowers at home as they create a lively and pleasant atmosphere. Additionally, flowers often improve my mood.

Gợi ý: คำตอบนี้มีความสับสนและใช้คำผิดหลายคำ เช่น 'suffering flower farm lovely love flower' และ 'live fish' ควรใช้ประโยคที่ชัดเจนและมีโครงสร้างที่ถูกต้อง รวมถึงใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหลของประโยค

Ví dụ: Yes, I have a close friend who loves flowers. She often spends her weekends visiting different flower farms because it helps her relax. She also enjoys arranging flowers at home, which creates a peaceful atmosphere.

Gợi ý: คำตอบนี้มีคำผิดและประโยคไม่สมบูรณ์ เช่น 'favours' แทน 'flowers' และ 'boom trap and clothes' ที่ไม่เข้าใจ ควรใช้คำที่ถูกต้องและอธิบายรายละเอียดให้ชัดเจนขึ้น

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many flowers where I live, especially in public parks and gardens. For example, during spring, the streets are filled with blooming flowers that brighten up the neighborhood. I really enjoy seeing them.

Gợi ý: คำตอบนี้ดีในเรื่องความชัดเจนและโครงสร้างประโยค แต่ควรใช้คำพหูพจน์ให้ถูกต้อง เช่น 'flowers' และ 'friends' รวมถึงเพิ่มคำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหล

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of flowers in my daily life because I find their colors and shapes really beautiful. For example, when I walk in the park or visit a garden, I like capturing different kinds of flowers to share with my friends and keep memories.

Gợi ý: คำตอบนี้มีความสับสนและใช้คำผิดหลายคำ เช่น 'weekly' แทน 'wedding' และ 'tofu' ที่ไม่เกี่ยวข้อง ควรใช้คำที่ถูกต้องและอธิบายให้ชัดเจนถึงโอกาสที่คนส่งดอกไม้

Ví dụ: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others on special occasions such as birthdays, weddings, or anniversaries. Sending flowers is a beautiful way to express emotions like love and appreciation.

× Yes, I do love fiber because they are pretty and color to any envelope.

✓ Yes, I do love flowers because they are pretty and add color to any envelope.

The word 'fiber' is incorrect here; it should be 'flowers' to match the context. Also, 'color' should be used as a verb 'add color' to make sense. The plural form 'flowers' is needed to agree with 'they'.

× For example, I enjoy having fish flower at home as they createspace and live fishing atmosphere.

✓ For example, I enjoy having fresh flowers at home as they create space and a lively, fresh atmosphere.

The phrase 'fish flower' is incorrect; it should be 'fresh flowers'. 'Createspace' should be two words 'create space'. 'Live fishing atmosphere' is incorrect; it should be 'a lively, fresh atmosphere'. The verb 'create' should be plural to agree with 'they'.

× Additionally for the flower often have lovely that apply my mood mood.

✓ Additionally, flowers often have a lovely effect that improves my mood.

The sentence is unclear and uses incorrect adjectives and structure. 'Lovely' should describe 'effect' or 'appearance'. 'Apply my mood mood' is incorrect; it should be 'improves my mood'.

× Yes, I know a course of friends who are suffering flower farm lovely love flower.

✓ Yes, I know a group of friends who love flowers and work on a flower farm.

'A course of friends' is incorrect; it should be 'a group of friends'. 'Suffering flower farm lovely love flower' is nonsensical; it should be 'love flowers and work on a flower farm'.

× She often spent her weekend quarantine and going different types of flower which she fry very relaxed and live fish for her flower button up at home and she ate up powerful atmosphere.

✓ She often spends her weekends in quarantine and goes to different types of flowers, which she finds very relaxing and creates a lively atmosphere at home.

The verb tenses are inconsistent. 'Spent' should be 'spends' to match 'often'. 'Going' should be 'goes'. 'Fry' should be 'finds'. 'Live fish' should be 'lively'. 'Button up' and 'ate up powerful atmosphere' are incorrect and replaced with 'creates a lively atmosphere'.

× Yes, there are quite a few favours around where I live, especially in public parks and gardens.

✓ Yes, there are quite a few flowers around where I live, especially in public parks and gardens.

'Favours' is a misspelling; it should be 'flowers'.

× For example, during spring the street and life will cost flowers with boom trap and clothes which lay up the neighborhood.

✓ For example, during spring the streets and life are covered with blooming flowers and clothes that brighten up the neighborhood.

The sentence contains many incorrect words: 'cost' should be 'covered', 'boom trap' should be 'blooming', 'clothes' is unclear but possibly 'colors' or 'decorations'. The sentence is corrected to make sense with proper adjectives and nouns.

× I often take photos of flower in my daily life because I find their color and shape really beautiful.

✓ I often take photos of flowers in my daily life because I find their color and shape really beautiful.

'Flower' should be plural 'flowers' to agree with 'their'.

× For example, when I walk in the park or visit garden, I like capturing different kind of flower to share with my friend and keep memories in my mind.

✓ For example, when I walk in the park or visit a garden, I like capturing different kinds of flowers to share with my friends and keep memories in my mind.

'Visit garden' needs an article 'a garden'. 'Different kind of flower' should be 'different kinds of flowers'. 'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to match context.

× Yes, people in my country often send flower to other on special day such as birthday, weekly or necessary flower are occurred or tofu and beautiful way to explore emotion like love.

✓ Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others on special days such as birthdays, weekly events, or when necessary. Flowers are a beautiful way to express emotions like love.

'Send flower' should be 'send flowers'. 'Other' should be 'others'. 'Special day' should be plural 'special days'. The rest of the sentence is unclear and corrected for clarity and grammar.