Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が見られます。例えば、「I don't like so much」は不自然で、「I don't like them very much」が適切です。また、理由を述べる際に接続詞を使って文をつなげるとより自然になります。

Ví dụ: Actually, I don't like flowers very much because I would have to water them regularly, and also, bugs often appear around them.

Gợi ý: 回答は内容が伝わりますが、文法の誤り（例えば、"she don't"は"she doesn't"）や不自然な表現があります。また、時制の使い方を整理し、接続詞を使って文をつなげると良いでしょう。

Ví dụ: My grandmother used to love flowers, especially sakura, but now she lives in an apartment and doesn't have a garden.

Gợi ý: 回答が曖昧で、文法や語彙の誤りが多いです。"vegetation"の使い方も不自然で、"shrubs flooring"は意味が伝わりにくいです。具体的な情報を盛り込み、正しい語彙と文法を使うことが必要です。

Ví dụ: I'm not sure about flowers specifically, but my city has a lot of trees and shrubs, so the area is quite green.

Gợi ý: 回答は内容が伝わりますが、文が少し冗長で不自然な部分があります。"when I, for example, when I go"のような繰り返しを避け、接続詞を使って文を簡潔にすると良いでしょう。

Ví dụ: Sometimes I take photos of flowers, for example, when I visit a flower garden or a theme park with flower displays because I think they are beautiful.

Gợi ý: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現があります。例えば、"there are culture to give them the flower"は不自然で、"there is a culture of giving flowers"が適切です。また、接続詞を使って文をつなげるとより自然になります。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think people often send flowers in Japan, especially when someone is in the hospital, as there is a culture of giving flowers. Also, people usually give flowers when proposing marriage.

× Actually I don't like so much I have to give water if I had flowers, so I don't want to and also I don't like it because the bugs appears.

✓ Actually, I don't like it so much because I have to give water if I had flowers, so I don't want to. Also, I don't like it because bugs appear.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'have to' without proper conjunction and mixes tenses. 'Have to' is a modal verb phrase and should be used correctly. Also, 'bugs appears' is incorrect subject-verb agreement (plural subject with singular verb). The sentence is corrected by adding conjunctions and fixing verb agreement.

× Actually I don't like so much I have to give water if I had flowers, so I don't want to and also I don't like it because the bugs appears.

✓ Actually, I don't like it so much because I have to give water if I had flowers, so I don't want to. Also, I don't like it because bugs appear.

The phrase 'if I had flowers' is a conditional clause referring to a hypothetical past or present situation, so 'had' is correct here. However, the sentence structure is confusing and needs punctuation and conjunctions to clarify meaning.

× Actually I don't like so much I have to give water if I had flowers, so I don't want to and also I don't like it because the bugs appears.

✓ Actually, I don't like it so much because I have to give water if I had flowers, so I don't want to. Also, I don't like it because bugs appear.

The verb 'appears' does not agree with the plural subject 'bugs'. The correct verb form is 'appear' for plural subjects.

× Hmm my grandmother liked flowers and previously but now she is living on an apartment so she don't have her garden.

✓ Hmm, my grandmother liked flowers previously, but now she is living in an apartment, so she doesn't have her garden.

The subject 'she' requires the verb 'doesn't' instead of 'don't' for correct subject-verb agreement. Also, 'living on an apartment' is incorrect preposition usage; it should be 'living in an apartment'.

× Hmm my grandmother liked flowers and previously but now she is living on an apartment so she don't have her garden.

✓ Hmm, my grandmother liked flowers previously, but now she is living in an apartment, so she doesn't have her garden.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect when referring to living in a place. The correct preposition is 'in' for enclosed spaces like apartments.

× Hmm my grandmother liked flowers and previously but now she is living on an apartment so she don't have her garden. I think she loved the sakura.

✓ Hmm, my grandmother liked flowers previously, but now she is living in an apartment, so she doesn't have her garden. I think she loved the sakura.

The past tense 'liked' and 'loved' are used correctly to describe past preferences. The sentence is corrected mainly for preposition and subject-verb agreement issues.

× Umm, I don't know well, but I think they're very much vegetation.

✓ Umm, I don't know well, but I think there is a lot of vegetation.

'Very much vegetation' is incorrect; 'a lot of vegetation' or 'much vegetation' is appropriate. Also, 'they're' (they are) is incorrect here; 'there is' should be used to indicate existence.

× Umm, I don't know well, but I think they're very much vegetation.

✓ Umm, I don't know well, but I think there is a lot of vegetation.

The phrase 'they're' is a contraction of 'they are' and is incorrect here. The correct existential phrase is 'there is' to indicate the presence of vegetation.

× In my city there are many trees and the shrubs flooring so.

✓ In my city, there are many trees and shrubs covering the ground.

'The shrubs flooring' is incorrect. 'Shrubs' is plural and does not need 'the' here, and 'flooring' is not the correct noun. 'Covering the ground' or 'ground cover' is appropriate.

× In my city there are many trees and the shrubs flooring so.

✓ In my city, there are many trees and shrubs covering the ground.

The original sentence is incomplete and awkward. It needs restructuring to clearly express that shrubs cover the ground.

× Sometimes I do when I, for example, when I go to the flower garden or when I go to the theme park and there are the flowers area.

✓ Sometimes I do, for example, when I go to the flower garden or to the theme park where there is a flower area.

The sentence is fragmented and has awkward phrasing. It is corrected by removing unnecessary commas and clarifying the location with 'where there is a flower area'.

× Sometimes I do when I, for example, when I go to the flower garden or when I go to the theme park and there are the flowers area.

✓ Sometimes I do, for example, when I go to the flower garden or to the theme park where there is a flower area.

'The flowers area' is incorrect; 'a flower area' is appropriate because it is a non-specific area.

× Sometimes I do when I, for example, when I go to the flower garden or when I go to the theme park and there are the flowers area.

✓ Sometimes I do, for example, when I go to the flower garden or to the theme park where there is a flower area.

The phrase 'go to the theme park and there are the flowers area' is awkward. Using 'to the theme park where there is a flower area' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× Especially when people are in hospital in Japan, there are culture to give them the flower.

✓ Especially when people are in hospital in Japan, there is a culture of giving them flowers.

'There are culture' is incorrect; 'there is a culture' is correct. Also, 'the flower' should be plural 'flowers' as a general concept.

× Especially when people are in hospital in Japan, there are culture to give them the flower.

✓ Especially when people are in hospital in Japan, there is a culture of giving them flowers.

'Culture' is uncountable and singular, so 'there is' is used. 'The flower' is incorrect; 'flowers' is the correct plural form.

× And also when you do a proposal to marry, I think people give the flower.

✓ Also, when you propose marriage, I think people give flowers.

'Do a proposal to marry' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'propose marriage' or 'make a marriage proposal'. Also, 'give the flower' should be 'give flowers'.