Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中语法和表达存在错误，且句子结构不够自然。建议注意时态和主谓一致，避免语法错误，同时表达要简洁自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, I love flowers, especially sunflowers. After a long day at work, seeing flowers helps me relax and improves my mood.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在冗余，如重复使用主语。建议简化句子结构，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, my best friend Lily, a middle school teacher, loves flowers and buys them every week.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，句子结构混乱。建议分句表达，注意时态和冠词使用，避免重复。

Ví dụ: Yes, I live in Hangzhou. There is a big park near my home where many flowers bloom in spring and summer, such as roses and sunflowers.

Gợi ý: 语法错误明显，表达不清晰。建议使用正确时态，简洁表达原因，并注意词汇搭配。

Ví dụ: Actually, I don't take many photos of flowers because I work from morning to afternoon and have little free time to go outside.

Gợi ý: 回答中表达不够连贯，存在语法和用词错误。建议使用连接词，简化句子，避免重复，表达更自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, people often send flowers to friends and relatives during big celebrations. For example, I sent roses and lilies to my best friend for her birthday.

× When I was out of my work I feel very tired but the flowers makes me chill up and have a good emotions.

✓ When I was out of my work I feel very tired but the flowers make me chill out and have good emotions.

flowers是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式make，而不是makes；emotions前不需要冠词good emotions表示情绪良好。

× When I was out of my work I feel very tired but the flowers makes me chill up and have a good emotions.

✓ When I was out of my work I felt very tired but the flowers made me chill out and have good emotions.

句子描述过去的情况，动词feel和make应使用过去式felt和made。

× the flowers makes me chill up and have a good emotions.

✓ the flowers make me chill out and have good emotions.

flowers是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式make，而不是makes。

× When I was out of my work I feel very tired but the flowers makes me chill up and have a good emotions.

✓ When I was off work I feel very tired but the flowers make me chill out and have good emotions.

短语应为off work，表示下班或不工作；chill up应为chill out，表示放松。

× My best friend Lily, who was a teacher in the middle school, she likes flowers very much.

✓ My best friend Lily, who was a teacher in middle school, likes flowers very much.

描述过去身份时用was，但主句描述现在喜欢花，应使用现在时likes；去掉多余的主语she。

× She bought flowers every week.

✓ She buys flowers every week.

根据上下文，描述习惯动作应使用一般现在时buys。

× Yes, there I lived in Hangzhou, there's a big park near my home in the summer and in the spring there are a lot of flowers like rose and sunflowers and other kind of flowers in the park.

✓ Yes, I live in Hangzhou. There's a big park near my home. In summer and spring, there are a lot of flowers like roses, sunflowers, and other kinds of flowers in the park.

句子结构混乱，分开表达更清晰；rose和sunflower应使用复数roses和sunflowers；other kind应为other kinds。

× Actually, I didn't take much photos of flowers because I needed to work anymore from the morning to afternoon, so I didn't have much spare time to go outside.

✓ Actually, I don't take many photos of flowers because I need to work from morning to afternoon, so I don't have much spare time to go outside.

描述习惯动作应使用一般现在时；much用于不可数名词，photos是可数名词，应使用many；anymore用法不当，去掉。

× Actually, I didn't take much photos of flowers because I needed to work anymore from the morning to afternoon, so I didn't have much spare time to go outside.

✓ Actually, I don't take many photos of flowers because I need to work from morning to afternoon, so I don't have much spare time to go outside.

photos是可数名词，much应改为many。

× In my country, many people send the flowers to the friends and relatives in a big celebration.

✓ In my country, many people send flowers to friends and relatives on big celebrations.

send flowers to sb.不需要the；庆祝活动用on big celebrations更合适。

× For example, my friend had the coming of my best friend's birthday.

✓ For example, my friend celebrated my best friend's upcoming birthday.

原句表达不清，使用celebrated和upcoming更准确。

× I sent her the Rose and lilies for her as a present for her birthday.

✓ I sent her roses and lilies as a present for her birthday.

rose应为复数roses且不需要大写the；去掉多余的her。