Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is heartfelt but could be clearer and more concise. Try to avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and ensure your message is easy to follow.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love flowers, especially in the evening when I take walks in the nearby park. I enjoy touching and admiring them, but I never pick them to protect the environment.

Gợi ý: Your answer needs clearer structure and grammar. Start with a direct response, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid repetition and improve sentence clarity.

Ví dụ: Yes, my environmental teacher from night school loved flowers a lot. Because of him, I became very environmentally friendly and learned how to protect nature and grow new plants.

Gợi ý: Your answer is good but could be more concise and better organized. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid unnecessary details that do not directly answer the question.

Ví dụ: Yes, near my house there is a large park full of flowers, trees, and a pond. Every evening after work, I go there with my family and pet Jackie to enjoy the colorful flowers.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good content but needs clearer sentence structure and completion. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Ví dụ: Yes, I take many photos of flowers. I have a garden at home where I grow new flowers every month according to the season, which adds beauty to my house. Many of my mobile photos and even my profile picture feature flowers.

Gợi ý: Your answer is incomplete and somewhat unclear. Try to complete your sentences and provide specific examples. Use linking words to organize your ideas logically.

Ví dụ: Yes, in my country, people often exchange flowers. For example, when someone visits your home for the first time, we give them a bouquet. Also, when someone returns after a long time abroad, we welcome them with flowers. Flowers are also a symbol of love in many occasions.

× Yes, I love flowers in the evening time, I always go for a walk in my nearest park and there I feel how the flowers are talking with me.

✓ Yes, I love flowers. In the evening, I always go for a walk in the nearest park, and there I feel as if the flowers are talking to me.

The original sentence is a run-on sentence combining multiple ideas without proper punctuation or conjunctions. Breaking it into shorter sentences and adding appropriate connectors improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I always love to talk with the flowers and touching them, but I never uh, bring them out from the roots.

✓ I always love to talk to the flowers and touch them, but I never bring them out from the roots.

The verb 'talk' is followed by the preposition 'to' rather than 'with' when referring to speaking to something. Also, 'touching' should be parallel with 'talk' and thus changed to 'touch'.

× So I just want to, I am my environment.

✓ So I just want to say that I am part of my environment.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'say that' and clarifying the meaning improves sentence structure and clarity.

× Yes, on the person who was my teacher in my night standard, he loves very much flowers.

✓ Yes, there was a person who was my teacher in my night standard; he loved flowers very much.

The phrase 'on the person' is incorrect; it should be 'there was a person'. Also, 'he loves very much flowers' is awkward; 'he loved flowers very much' is correct past tense and word order.

× He was he was my environmental teacher.

✓ He was my environmental teacher.

The repetition 'He was he was' is an error; removing the duplicate corrects the sentence.

× That's why just because of him I become a too much environment friendly.

✓ That's why, just because of him, I became very environmentally friendly.

'Become a too much environment friendly' is incorrect. 'Became' is the correct past tense, and 'very environmentally friendly' is the proper adjective phrase.

× So I am always learn how to protect the environment, how to grow new.

✓ So I am always learning how to protect the environment and how to grow new plants.

The phrase 'I am always learn' is incorrect; it should be 'I am always learning' to indicate continuous action. Also, 'how to grow new' is incomplete; specifying 'plants' clarifies the meaning.

× Yes, I'm nearer to my house, there is a park, big park where there are lots of flowers, tree pond, everything.

✓ Yes, near my house, there is a big park where there are lots of flowers, trees, a pond, and everything.

'I'm nearer to my house' is incorrect; 'near my house' is correct. Also, 'tree pond' is unclear; separating 'trees' and 'pond' with commas clarifies the list.

× So in the always in the evening time after my job, I went there with my family and with my pet.

✓ So, always in the evening after my job, I go there with my family and my pet.

The question is about habitual action, so present tense 'I go' is appropriate rather than past tense 'I went'.

× His name is Jackie. So we both are enjoying in that park and I love a colorful flowers.

✓ His name is Jackie. So we both enjoy that park, and I love colorful flowers.

'We both are enjoying in that park' is awkward; 'we both enjoy that park' is better. Also, 'a colorful flowers' is incorrect; 'colorful flowers' without 'a' is correct.

× Yes, my gallery is full of my pictures with the flowers.

✓ Yes, my gallery is full of my pictures of flowers.

The phrase 'pictures with the flowers' is less natural than 'pictures of flowers' when referring to photos featuring flowers.

× So I also have a garden at my house where I am growing new flowers every month according to the season and that will be helpful in the beauty of my house.

✓ I also have a garden at my house where I grow new flowers every month according to the season, and that helps beautify my house.

'I am growing' suggests a current ongoing action, but the context implies a habitual action, so 'I grow' is better. Also, 'that will be helpful in the beauty' is awkward; 'that helps beautify' is clearer.

× And I had a had a lot of pictures in my mobile phone and even my profile of my mobile phone is also with the.

✓ I have a lot of pictures on my mobile phone, and even my mobile phone profile picture features flowers.

'I had a had a lot' is a repetition error; 'I have a lot' is correct. Also, 'profile of my mobile phone is also with the' is incomplete and unclear; rephrasing clarifies the meaning.

× Yes, in my country there is a lot of exchange of flowers.

✓ Yes, in my country there is a lot of exchange of flowers.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× When somebody is coming in your house for the first time, we are giving bouquet to them and when anybody is arriving to your country after a long time, so we are also welcoming that person with the flowers.

✓ When somebody comes to your house for the first time, we give them a bouquet, and when anybody arrives in your country after a long time, we also welcome that person with flowers.

The prepositions 'coming in your house' and 'arriving to your country' are incorrect; the correct prepositions are 'comes to your house' and 'arrives in your country'. Also, 'we are giving bouquet to them' should be 'we give them a bouquet' for natural phrasing.