Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you love flowers?
Thí sinh
I like flowers which is fragrant and beautiful, which can calm me down and make me uplifting.
Giám khảo
Do you know anyone who loves flowers?
Thí sinh
Well my mother is a flower lover. She is addicted to flower and even take a curse about flower to occur. The knowledge of the various flower is and the specific need they need.
Giám khảo
Are there a lot of flowers where you live?
Thí sinh
Yeah, as I said, my mother's flower. That's why my home is full of flower the especially in the living room, the flower lighting up the space and as a decoration.
Giám khảo
Do you take photos of flowers in your daily life?
Thí sinh
Well I'm not the one who really like take a photo but for Flower I I do capture them in my phone and I will save them into an album which I will open it and browse it while I was blue.
Giám khảo
Do people in your country often send flowers to others?
Thí sinh
We do send flower to others and it's a social tradition for us. For example, we will send a flower to the patient who is, which means to congratulate him will recover soon.
Do you love flowers?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,且表达不够自然。建议注意主谓一致,避免重复表达,并使用更地道的表达方式。
Ví dụ: Yes, I love flowers, especially those that have a pleasant fragrance and vibrant colors because they help me feel calm and uplifted.
Do you know anyone who loves flowers?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法和表达错误较多,句子不完整且含糊。建议使用完整句子,表达清晰,并避免拼写错误。
Ví dụ: Yes, my mother loves flowers very much. She even took a course about flowers to learn more about their varieties and how to take care of them properly.
Are there a lot of flowers where you live?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答结构不清晰,语法错误较多,表达不够连贯。建议使用连贯的句子,注意单复数和冠词的使用。
Ví dụ: Yes, there are many flowers at my home because my mother loves them. Especially in the living room, the flowers brighten up the space and serve as beautiful decorations.
Do you take photos of flowers in your daily life?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法和表达不够准确,句子较长且重复。建议简洁表达,注意时态和词汇的正确使用。
Ví dụ: I don't usually take many photos, but I do take pictures of flowers with my phone and save them in an album to look at when I feel sad.
Do people in your country often send flowers to others?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误明显,表达不完整。建议使用完整句子,表达清楚具体的习俗和原因。
Ví dụ: Yes, sending flowers is a common tradition in my country. For instance, people often send flowers to patients to wish them a speedy recovery.
× I like flowers which is fragrant and beautiful, which can calm me down and make me uplifting.
✓ I like flowers which are fragrant and beautiful, which can calm me down and make me feel uplifted.
flowers 是复数,谓语动词应使用复数形式 are,而不是 is。
× She is addicted to flower and even take a curse about flower to occur.
✓ She is addicted to flowers and even took a course about flowers to learn.
flower 应为复数 flowers;动词 take 应与主语 she 的过去时态一致,改为 took;curse 应为 course,且句子结构需调整。
× The knowledge of the various flower is and the specific need they need.
✓ The knowledge of the various flowers and their specific needs.
flower 应为复数 flowers;句子不完整,需补充完整表达。
× Yeah, as I said, my mother's flower. That's why my home is full of flower the especially in the living room, the flower lighting up the space and as a decoration.
✓ Yeah, as I said, my mother's flowers. That's why my home is full of flowers, especially in the living room, where the flowers light up the space and serve as decoration.
flower 应为复数 flowers;句子结构需调整,使表达更通顺。
× Well I'm not the one who really like take a photo but for Flower I I do capture them in my phone and I will save them into an album which I will open it and browse it while I was blue.
✓ Well, I'm not the one who really likes taking photos, but for flowers, I do capture them on my phone and save them into an album which I open and browse when I am feeling blue.
like 后应接动名词 taking;主谓一致,likes;表达更自然流畅。
× We do send flower to others and it's a social tradition for us.
✓ We do send flowers to others and it's a social tradition for us.
flower 应为复数 flowers。
× For example, we will send a flower to the patient who is, which means to congratulate him will recover soon.
✓ For example, we will send flowers to patients, which means to wish them a speedy recovery.
句子结构混乱,需调整使表达完整且符合习惯用法。