Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you love flowers?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do love flowers. They add beauty and color to any environment which instantly lifts my mood.
Giám khảo
Do you know anyone who loves flowers?
Thí sinh
Yes, one of my best friends absolutely loves flowers. She enjoys gardening and often spends her weekends planning and caring for different types of flowers because she finds it relaxing and rewarding. For example, she recently grew a beautiful Rose Garden.
Giám khảo
Are there a lot of flowers where you live?
Thí sinh
Yes, there are quite a lot of flowers where I live, especially in the public parks and the residential gardens, and I'd like to go for a walk here after school and this really makes me feel relaxing.
Giám khảo
Do you take photos of flowers in your daily life?
Thí sinh
Yes, whenever I go out and meet different flowers with beautiful color and shapes, I'd always like to take photos of them.
Giám khảo
Do people in your country often send flowers to others?
Thí sinh
Yes, people are in my country often send flowers to others, especially on special occasions like birthdays, weddings, and anniversaries. Flowers are seen as a thoughtful and beautiful way to express emotions such as love, gratitude, or sympathy.
Do you love flowers?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 回答自然且表达了喜爱花卉的原因,但可以更简洁,避免冗余。建议将句子简化,同时增加具体的描述,使表达更生动。
Ví dụ: Yes, I love flowers because their vibrant colors brighten up any space and instantly improve my mood.
Do you know anyone who loves flowers?
Điểm: 90.0Gợi ý: 回答内容丰富且结构清晰,使用了连接词和具体例子。建议在表达时注意句子长度,避免过长,保持语言自然流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, my best friend loves flowers. She spends her weekends gardening because she finds it relaxing. For example, she recently planted a beautiful rose garden.
Are there a lot of flowers where you live?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答中信息较多,但句子结构稍显复杂且有语法错误。建议分句表达,使用连接词使句子更连贯,同时注意语法准确。
Ví dụ: Yes, there are many flowers where I live, especially in public parks and residential gardens. I like to walk there after school because it helps me relax.
Do you take photos of flowers in your daily life?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 回答表达了拍摄花卉的习惯,但句子略显冗长且用词重复。建议简化句子,使用更自然的表达方式。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of flowers with beautiful colors and shapes when I go outside.
Do people in your country often send flowers to others?
Điểm: 88.0Gợi ý: 回答内容完整且表达清晰,但句子开头有语法错误。建议调整句子结构,使表达更自然流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, in my country, people often send flowers on special occasions like birthdays, weddings, and anniversaries. Flowers are a thoughtful way to express feelings like love, gratitude, or sympathy.
× ...and this really makes me feel relaxing.
✓ ...and this really makes me feel relaxed.
这里应该使用形容词'relaxed'来描述感受,而不是动词形式'relaxing'。'Relaxing'是现在分词,表示使人放松的事物,而'relaxed'表示感到放松的状态。
× Yes, people are in my country often send flowers to others, especially on special occasions like birthdays, weddings, and anniversaries.
✓ Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others, especially on special occasions like birthdays, weddings, and anniversaries.
句中多余的'are'导致语法错误,正确表达应为'people in my country',表示'我国家的人们'。去掉'are'后,句子主谓一致,语法正确。