Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误，如"vast"应为"vase"，且句子结构不够自然。建议简化句子，避免语法错误，并使用更自然的表达。

Ví dụ: Yes, I love flowers. I often buy a bunch and put them in a beautiful vase to decorate my room.

Gợi ý: 回答较好，但可以使用更多连接词使句子更连贯，同时增加细节使内容更丰富。

Ví dụ: Well, off the top of my head, I would say my grandma, who is a big fan of planting flowers in her garden. She knows all kinds of flowers and waters them every day to keep them healthy.

Gợi ý: 回答内容丰富，但有重复词汇"and and"，且句子结尾不完整。建议注意语法细节，避免重复，并完善句子结尾。

Ví dụ: Yes, there is a small park across the street from my house with plenty of flowers. From my window, I can see water lilies, daffodils, roses, and many other kinds.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误，如"I've took"应为"I've taken"，且表达不够流畅。建议练习正确时态使用，简化表达。

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. Especially when I travel, I take photos of flowers I've never seen before. I even have a photo album to keep all these pictures.

Gợi ý: 回答中有多处语法和表达错误，如"sandy flower culture"不明确，句子结构混乱。建议使用简单明了的句子，避免不准确的词汇。

Ví dụ: Unfortunately, people in my country don't often send flowers to others. However, many people like receiving scented flowers because they think it's romantic.

× I always buy a bunch of flowers and place them in a beautiful vast just for decorate the room.

✓ I always buy a bunch of flowers and place them in a beautiful vase just to decorate the room.

这里“vast”应为“vase”，是拼写错误，且“just for decorate”应改为“just to decorate”，因为“just to do something”表示目的，使用不定式。

× I think there are water lilies, daffodils and and also roses, all kinds of.

✓ I think there are water lilies, daffodils, and also roses, all kinds of them.

句末“all kinds of”后应接名词或代词，缺少宾语，需补充“them”。

× I also got a photo album for those flower pictures I've taken, I've took.

✓ I also got a photo album for those flower pictures I've taken.

“I've took”是错误的过去分词形式，应为“I've taken”，因为现在完成时需要用过去分词。

× We'd only have a sandy flower culture, just like other Western culture.

✓ We only have a sandy flower culture, just like other Western cultures.

“We'd”是“we would”的缩写，语境中应为一般现在时“we only have”。“culture”前应加复数形式“cultures”，因为指多个文化。

× But I do think a lot of us, we want to be scented flowers from other peoples.

✓ But I do think a lot of us want to receive scented flowers from other people.

“we want to be scented flowers”语法错误，主语不应是被动接受物品，应改为“want to receive scented flowers”。“peoples”应为“people”，表示人们。