Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并且使用更准确的词汇来表达观点。

Ví dụ: I love flowers, especially those that don't have a strong smell. For example, sunflowers don't smell good to me, but I enjoy their bright colors because they improve my mood.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，表达混乱，建议先明确主题句，然后用具体细节支持，避免无关或矛盾的信息。

Ví dụ: My mother loves flowers very much. She often says that flowers are beautiful and their vibrant colors make people feel happy.

Gợi ý: 回答不连贯且含糊不清，建议直接回答问题，使用完整句子，并提供具体细节说明花的数量或种类。

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many flowers where I live because my mother chose this place for its beautiful gardens filled with various flowers.

Gợi ý: 回答较简短且不完整，建议补充更多细节说明原因，并使用连贯的句子表达。

Ví dụ: I don't often take photos of flowers because I am very busy with my studies. However, I sometimes take pictures when I have free time.

Gợi ý: 回答内容较完整，但有语法和发音错误，建议注意发音准确性和句子结构的完整性。

Ví dụ: Yes, people in my country often send flowers on special occasions such as weddings, graduations, and when someone is ill to express their feelings.

× Well it very depends you know sunflowers smell not good and but some flowers, flowers with non smells and beautiful.

✓ Well, it very much depends, you know. Sunflowers do not smell good, but some flowers have no smell and are beautiful.

这里动词用法错误，'depends'后面需要副词修饰，且句子结构混乱。'smell not good'应改为'do not smell good'，'flowers with non smells'应改为'flowers have no smell'。建议理清句子结构，正确使用动词和否定形式。

× I really love it and when I see that I get a better mood.

✓ I really love them, and when I see them, I get into a better mood.

'it'指代复数'flowers'不正确，应使用复数代词'them'。此外，'get a better mood'表达不自然，应改为'get into a better mood'。

× Well my mother really into love flowers and she sings flowers is very beautiful and they vibrate colors and make me in a bad mood and the their delightful.

✓ Well, my mother really loves flowers, and she says flowers are very beautiful. They have vibrant colors and make me feel delighted, not in a bad mood.

句中'into love flowers'用法错误，应为'really loves flowers'。'sings'应为'says'。'flowers is'主谓不一致，应为'flowers are'。'vibrate colors'应为'have vibrant colors'。'make me in a bad mood and the their delightful'表达混乱，改为'make me feel delighted, not in a bad mood'。

× Well of course you know my mother really love flowers and so she choose this place with many flowers to live and she told me the so many flowers came brighten up who?

✓ Well, of course, you know my mother really loves flowers, so she chose this place with many flowers to live, and she told me that so many flowers brighten up the place.

'my mother really love'主谓不一致，应为'loves'。'choose'时态错误，应为'chose'。'the so many flowers came brighten up who?'结构混乱，应改为'that so many flowers brighten up the place'。

× Well, to be honest, I don't have free time to take beautiful sceneries including flowers. No, I'm very in my studies and.

✓ Well, to be honest, I don't have free time to take photos of beautiful sceneries including flowers. No, I'm very busy with my studies.

'take beautiful sceneries'表达不当，应为'take photos of beautiful sceneries'。'I'm very in my studies'缺少形容词，正确表达为'I'm very busy with my studies'。

× Well, without a doubt in there are many occasions when people send flowers to others like windings, graduations and when some people are sick and they often send flowers.

✓ Well, without a doubt, there are many occasions when people send flowers to others, like weddings, graduations, and when some people are sick, they often send flowers.

'without a doubt in there are'结构错误，应为'without a doubt, there are'。'windings'拼写错误，应为'weddings'。句子中缺少逗号，影响理解。建议注意介词和标点的正确使用。