Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và có lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như 'Bo bought' không đúng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng ngữ pháp hơn.

Ví dụ: I don't usually pay much attention to flowers, but I often buy them as gifts for special occasions to show my appreciation.

Gợi ý: Bạn cần chú ý đến ngữ pháp số nhiều và số ít, ví dụ 'my mom's is' nên là 'my mom is' và 'she usually buy' nên là 'she usually buys'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ như 'I think'.

Ví dụ: My mom loves flowers and often buys them to decorate our house because she believes they create a warm and stylish atmosphere.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và thiếu sự mạch lạc. Bạn nên sử dụng liên từ để kết nối câu và chú ý đến số nhiều, ví dụ 'there's a lot of kind of flowers' nên là 'there are many kinds of flowers'.

Ví dụ: Near my school, there is a large garden with many kinds of flowers, such as sunflowers and roses, which have a very pleasant fragrance.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên tránh dùng từ 'care about' không phù hợp trong ngữ cảnh này và chú ý đến cách dùng đại từ, ví dụ 'a picture with it' nên là 'pictures of them'.

Ví dụ: I rarely take photos of flowers in my daily life, but on special occasions, I like to take pictures holding flowers with my mom because they look beautiful.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và đúng ngữ pháp để truyền đạt ý tưởng.

Ví dụ: People in my country don't usually send flowers daily, but they often buy flowers to give to someone during special celebrations.

× Well I don't really care about flowers, but when it comes to special occasion I usually Bo bought the flowers to give it to the main character on that special occasion.

✓ Well I don't really care about flowers, but when it comes to special occasions I usually buy the flowers to give to the main character on that special occasion.

The phrase 'Bo bought' is incorrect and seems to be a typo; it should be 'buy' to match the present habitual action indicated by 'usually'. Also, 'special occasion' should be pluralized to 'special occasions' to indicate generality. The verb tense should be present simple to express habitual actions.

× Well, my mom's is really keen on flowers. She usually buy flowers to decorate our house.

✓ Well, my mom is really keen on flowers. She usually buys flowers to decorate our house.

The verb 'buy' should be 'buys' to agree with the third person singular subject 'She'. Also, 'my mom's' is incorrect here; it should be 'my mom'.

× I think it's I think flowers are nice way to show a memorable and uh, fashionable too.

✓ I think flowers are a nice way to show something memorable and, uh, fashionable too.

The phrase 'it's I think' is redundant and incorrect. Also, 'nice way' needs an article 'a' before it. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× In my place where I live, there's a lot of flowers in a big garden next to my school, there's a lot of kind of flowers like sunflower or rose, and their smells is very uh.

✓ In the place where I live, there's a lot of flowers in a big garden next to my school. There are many kinds of flowers like sunflowers or roses, and their smell is very nice.

'There's a lot of flowers' should be 'there are a lot of flowers' because 'flowers' is plural. 'A lot of kind of flowers' should be 'many kinds of flowers'. 'Sunflower or rose' should be pluralized to 'sunflowers or roses'. 'Their smells is' should be 'their smell is' because 'smell' is singular here.

× They don't usually send flowers to others in their daily life, but in the occasion they always bought the flowers to give it to a person being celebrate is create their.

✓ They don't usually send flowers to others in their daily life, but on special occasions they always buy flowers to give to a person being celebrated.

'Bought' is past tense but the sentence context requires present tense 'buy' to indicate habitual action. 'In the occasion' should be 'on special occasions'. 'Give it to a person being celebrate is create their' is incorrect and corrected to 'give to a person being celebrated'.