Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答不够自然且有语法错误，句子结构不完整。建议用更自然的表达方式，避免语法错误，并且补充具体原因。

Ví dụ: I don't have a strong preference for flowers, but I especially like sunflowers because they are bright and cheerful, which always lifts my mood.

Gợi ý: 回答中出现了代词错误（he应为she），且表达稍显重复。建议注意代词使用，句子更简洁流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, my mother loves flowers very much because she is skilled at planting them. She often decorates our house with various flowers, making it look beautiful and lively.

Gợi ý: 回答语法混乱，表达不清晰，句子冗长且重复。建议简化句子，理清逻辑，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many flowers around my home because my mother is very good at gardening. She has planted various flowers and plants, so I can see them everywhere when I wake up.

Gợi ý: 回答表达基本清楚，但句子结构可以更自然，避免重复。建议使用更流畅的表达方式。

Ví dụ: I don't usually take photos of flowers, but if I see a special or memorable flower, I like to take a picture to remember it.

Gợi ý: 回答中表达不够准确，句子结构不完整。建议明确表达送花的场合，并使用正确的连接词。

Ví dụ: Not very often, but people usually send flowers on special occasions, like between couples or when visiting patients to wish them well.

× I don't have preference about flowers, but I do like sunflowers most because I think sunflower is not only beautiful but also have some.

✓ I don't have a preference about flowers, but I do like sunflowers most because I think sunflowers are not only beautiful but also have some.

这里“preference”是可数名词，前面需要加冠词“a”。“sunflower”应使用复数形式“sunflowers”，因为指的是一般的向日葵。谓语动词“have”应与主语“sunflowers”保持一致，使用复数形式“have”。

× Yes, my mother loves flower very much because he has excellent skills in planting them.

✓ Yes, my mother loves flowers very much because she has excellent skills in planting them.

“my mother”是女性，代词应使用“she”而不是“he”。另外，“flower”应为复数形式“flowers”，因为指的是一般的花。

× She also enjoys decorating our house with different kinds of flowers, which makes the environment more beautiful and lively.

✓ She also enjoys decorating our house with different kinds of flowers, which make the environment more beautiful and lively.

关系代词“which”指代复数“flowers”，谓语动词应使用复数形式“make”。

× So she planned a lot of flower and grass in our home and and so every time I open my eyes, I can see a lot of flowers surrounding me.

✓ So she planted a lot of flowers and grass in our home, and every time I open my eyes, I can see a lot of flowers surrounding me.

“flower”应为复数形式“flowers”。“planned”应改为“planted”，因为这里指的是种植。句中重复了“and”，应删除多余的一个。

× So she planned a lot of flower and grass in our home and and so every time I open my eyes, I can see a lot of flowers surrounding me.

✓ So she plants a lot of flowers and grass in our home, and every time I open my eyes, I can see a lot of flowers surrounding me.

这里描述的是习惯性动作，应该使用一般现在时“plants”，而不是过去时“planned”。

× I think I will take a photo of my flower to remember.

✓ I think I will take a photo of my flowers to remember.

“flower”应为复数形式“flowers”，因为通常指多朵花。

× Not really, but sometimes when couples and between the patient and families we will send flowers to each other.

✓ Not really, but sometimes couples and patients and their families will send flowers to each other.

“between the patient and families”结构不正确，应改为“patients and their families”。另外，去掉“when”后面的“and”，使句子更通顺。