Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by avoiding hesitation and redundancy. Try to combine your ideas into one smooth sentence and avoid repeating the same point. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas naturally.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love flowers, especially roses, because their mesmerizing scent and red color symbolize love, which I find very beautiful.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by correcting grammar and using linking words to make it more coherent. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'way too many' and be more specific.

Ví dụ: Yes, my grandmother loves flowers. She has planted many varieties in her garden, which makes her feel calm because she finds flowers peaceful and colorful.

Gợi ý: Your answer can be improved by using more precise vocabulary and avoiding repetition. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically and correct grammar mistakes.

Ví dụ: Yes, I live in a place with beautiful natural scenery, so flowers are abundant. You can find various types of flowers along roads and in gardens.

Gợi ý: Your answer is good but can be more concise and natural. Avoid unnecessary details and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of flowers because looking at them brings me peace, especially when I browse my pictures without internet connection.

Gợi ý: Your answer can be improved by avoiding hesitation and redundancy. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent and correct grammar mistakes like 'newly began' to 'a newly begun'.

Ví dụ: Sending flowers is a relatively new tradition in my country, unlike in other countries where it is older. Nowadays, people often send flowers on occasions such as birthdays and weddings.

× Because roses indicate red color, which indicates love.

✓ Because roses indicate the red color, which indicates love.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'red color' to specify a particular color associated with roses. Without 'the', the phrase is grammatically incomplete.

× She has planted way too many flowers in her garden which makes her very calming and she finds flower very peaceful and colorful.

✓ She has planted way too many flowers in her garden which makes her very calm and she finds flowers very peaceful and colorful.

The adjective 'calming' is incorrect here; 'calm' describes a person's state. Also, 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' to agree with 'many' and the context.

× Flowers are part of the nature, so there are various type of flowers you may find in random roads or gardens.

✓ Flowers are part of nature, so there are various types of flowers you may find on random roads or in gardens.

'Nature' is an uncountable noun and does not need 'the'. 'Type' should be plural 'types' to agree with 'various'. Also, the prepositions 'on' and 'in' are more appropriate for 'roads' and 'gardens' respectively.