Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了对花的喜爱，但句子结构有些重复，且部分表达不够自然。建议使用更地道的表达方式，并避免重复，比如用不同的动词和句型丰富答案。

Ví dụ: Yes, I really love flowers. I usually buy fresh flowers every week and enjoy decorating my room and living room with them during the weekends because they add a lot of beauty and freshness.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误，如“like to gardening”应为“like gardening”或“like to garden”。建议注意动词形式，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, both my mom and I love flowers. We enjoy gardening together in our backyard, planting different kinds of flowers, and we really cherish those moments.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在重复词汇和时态错误，如“and and”、“smell smell”、“They were colorful”应为“are colorful”。建议注意时态一致，避免重复，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many kinds of flowers in our backyard, such as sunflowers, lilies, and roses. They are very colorful, and in spring, they have a pleasant fragrance.

Gợi ý: 句子结构不够自然，存在语法错误，如“like take photos to flowers”应为“like taking photos of flowers”，且表达不够连贯。建议使用更自然的表达，并注意介词和动词形式。

Ví dụ: Actually, I don't like taking photos of flowers because in China, it's considered more of an old lady's hobby. I prefer to simply enjoy looking at them.

Gợi ý: 回答不完整，句子结尾不完整且缺少谓语。建议完整表达观点，使用连接词，并补充具体细节使答案更丰富。

Ví dụ: Actually, sending flowers is not very common in China, but people do send them on special occasions such as hospital visits, weddings, or anniversaries.

× I will buy some flowers for me about every week.

✓ I buy some flowers for myself about every week.

The use of 'will' here is unnecessary because the sentence describes a habitual action. In English, habitual actions are expressed using the simple present tense. Also, 'for me' should be 'for myself' to correctly use the reflexive pronoun.

× I will buy some flowers for me about every week.

✓ I buy some flowers for myself about every week.

The pronoun 'me' is incorrect here; the reflexive pronoun 'myself' should be used when the subject and object refer to the same person.

× On weekends I would decorate my room and the living room with flowers.

✓ On weekends I decorate my room and the living room with flowers.

The modal verb 'would' is incorrectly used to describe a habitual action in the present. The simple present tense is appropriate for habitual actions.

× I will buy some flowers for me about every week.

✓ I buy some flowers for myself about every week.

The reflexive pronoun 'myself' should be used instead of 'me' when the subject and object are the same person.

× We like to gardening in our backyard to plant flowers and we really enjoy that moment.

✓ We like gardening in our backyard to plant flowers and we really enjoy that moment.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the gerund form without 'to'. 'Like to gardening' is incorrect; it should be 'like gardening'.

× We like to gardening in our backyard to plant flowers and we really enjoy that moment.

✓ We like gardening in our backyard to plant flowers and we really enjoy that moment.

After 'like', the verb should be in the gerund form without 'to'. So 'like gardening' is correct, not 'like to gardening'.

× They were colorful and in spring they smell smell.

✓ They are colorful and in spring they smell sweet.

The sentence mixes past tense 'were' with present tense 'smell'. Since the question is about general facts, present tense should be used. Also, 'smell smell' is a repetition and should be corrected to 'smell sweet' or similar.

× They were colorful and in spring they smell smell.

✓ They are colorful and in spring they smell sweet.

The repeated word 'smell' is incorrect. An adjective or adverb should follow 'smell' to describe the scent, such as 'smell sweet'.

× Actually I don't like take photos to flowers because in China is more like old grandma's hobbies so I think I would prefer to watch them.

✓ Actually, I don't like taking photos of flowers because in China it is more like old grandma's hobby, so I think I prefer to watch them.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the gerund 'taking'. The preposition 'to' is incorrect; it should be 'photos of flowers'. Also, 'is' needs a subject 'it'. 'Hobbies' should be singular 'hobby' to match 'more like'.

× Actually I don't like take photos to flowers because in China is more like old grandma's hobbies so I think I would prefer to watch them.

✓ Actually, I don't like taking photos of flowers because in China it is more like old grandma's hobby, so I prefer to watch them.

The modal verb 'would' is unnecessary here; simple present 'prefer' is better to express current preference.

× Actually, the culture of flowers is not so popular in China, but for some special occasions like hospital visits or the weddings or anniversaries, sending flowers is.

✓ Actually, the culture of flowers is not so popular in China, but for some special occasions like hospital visits, weddings, or anniversaries, sending flowers is common.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'sending flowers is.' It needs a complement such as 'common' to complete the meaning. Also, 'the weddings' should be 'weddings' without 'the'.