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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you love flowers?

Thí sinh

Maybe not really. I have no habit of adapting flowers, but my close friends send flowers to me. Very happy too.

Giám khảo

Do you know anyone who loves flowers?

Thí sinh

My mom she grow and keep a lot of flowers and plants. My home has a lot of these plants. She said she think these plants can help me happy and fear. The life is beautiful.

Giám khảo

Are there a lot of flowers where you live?

Thí sinh

At present I live alone. My room has there no plants and flowers in my room, but if I go out, my neighborhood has a lot of flowers in the garden.

Giám khảo

Do you take photos of flowers in your daily life?

Thí sinh

Not very often, but if I found the flower is so beautiful and filled with a sense of life, I would like take photos with my phone or camera.

Giám khảo

Do people in your country often send flowers to others?

Thí sinh

Yes, a lot of people like to send flowers as a gift, not like families, relevance, couples, friends. Florist has a lot of special and beautiful meaning.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you love flowers?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当,如'adapting flowers'应为'admiring flowers'或'keeping flowers'。句子结构不完整,表达不够自然。建议使用完整句子,明确表达观点,并避免语法错误。

Ví dụ: I don't really love flowers because I don't usually keep them, but I feel happy when my close friends send me flowers.

Do you know anyone who loves flowers?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,如'she grow'应为'she grows',表达不清晰。建议使用正确的时态和句子结构,表达观点时更具体和连贯。

Ví dụ: My mother loves flowers and grows many plants at home. She believes that these plants can make me feel happy and less afraid, which makes life more beautiful.

Are there a lot of flowers where you live?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和重复,如'My room has there no plants and flowers in my room'。建议简洁表达,避免重复,并使用正确的语法。

Ví dụ: Currently, I live alone and don't have any plants or flowers in my room. However, there are many flowers in the gardens around my neighborhood.

Do you take photos of flowers in your daily life?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答表达基本清楚,但存在语法错误,如'if I found'应为'if I find','would like take photos'应为'would like to take photos'。建议注意时态和动词搭配。

Ví dụ: I don't take photos of flowers very often, but if I find a flower that is very beautiful and full of life, I like to take photos with my phone or camera.

Do people in your country often send flowers to others?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答中表达不清晰,'not like families, relevance, couples, friends'语义不明。建议使用正确的词汇和句子结构,明确表达送花的对象和意义。

Ví dụ: Yes, many people in my country like to send flowers as gifts to family members, relatives, couples, and friends. Flowers often carry special and beautiful meanings.

Ngữ pháp

Verb + -ing form

× I have no habit of adapting flowers, but my close friends send flowers to me.

I have no habit of adopting flowers, but my close friends send flowers to me.

这里的动词应为'adopt'(采纳、接受),而不是'adapt'(适应)。'habit of'后面应接动名词形式,'adopting'更合适,但原句中用'adapting'是拼写错误。建议改为'adopting'。

Third person singular issue

× My mom she grow and keep a lot of flowers and plants.

My mom grows and keeps a lot of flowers and plants.

主语是第三人称单数'my mom',谓语动词应加-s,'grow'和'keep'应改为'grows'和'keeps'。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× My mom she grow and keep a lot of flowers and plants.

My mom grows and keeps a lot of flowers and plants.

句中重复使用了主语'my mom'和代词'she',造成冗余,应去掉'she'。

Present tense issue

× She said she think these plants can help me happy and fear.

She said she thinks these plants can help me be happy and less fearful.

主句是过去时'said',从句中动词应使用一般现在时'thinks',因为表达的是普遍真理。'help me happy and fear'结构不正确,应改为'help me be happy and less fearful'。

There be issue

× My room has there no plants and flowers in my room, but if I go out, my neighborhood has a lot of flowers in the garden.

There are no plants and flowers in my room, but if I go out, my neighborhood has a lot of flowers in the garden.

'has there no'结构不正确,表达否定存在应使用'There are no...'。

Verb + -ing form

× if I found the flower is so beautiful and filled with a sense of life, I would like take photos with my phone or camera.

If I find the flower is so beautiful and filled with a sense of life, I would like to take photos with my phone or camera.

条件句中应使用一般现在时'find','would like'后应接不定式'to take'。

Singular and plural issue

× Yes, a lot of people like to send flowers as a gift, not like families, relevance, couples, friends.

Yes, a lot of people like to send flowers as gifts, like families, relatives, couples, and friends.

'gift'应使用复数形式'gifts','relevance'应为'relatives',表示亲戚。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Yes, a lot of people like to send flowers as a gift, not like families, relevance, couples, friends.

Yes, a lot of people like to send flowers as gifts, like families, relatives, couples, and friends.

'not like'用法错误,应为'like'表示'像……一样'。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× Florist has a lot of special and beautiful meaning.

Flowers have a lot of special and beautiful meanings.

'Florist'是花商,语境应为'flowers',且'meaning'应使用复数形式'meanings'。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BeautifulAttractive
CloseNear; Dense; Evenly matched; Immediate; Intimate
HappyCheerful; Glad; Fortunate
SpecialExceptional; Distinctive; Momentous; Specific
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