Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，且表达不够自然。建议注意主谓一致，避免重复，并简洁表达观点。

Ví dụ: Yes, I love flowers because my mother enjoys planting many varieties in our garden. This creates a pleasant family atmosphere and has influenced me to appreciate flowers as well.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用正确的人称代词，避免重复，并提供具体细节。

Ví dụ: Yes, the first person who comes to mind is my mother. She has loved flowers since primary school and now grows many kinds in our garden.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法混乱且有重复，表达不连贯。建议简洁明了地描述环境，并避免无关词汇。

Ví dụ: Yes, my mother has planted many flowers around our home, including near my study desk, so I can often enjoy their fragrance.

Gợi ý: 回答较为完整，但有语法错误和重复。建议注意动词形式一致，避免重复表达。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of flowers because it allows me to capture their beauty. It also helps me relax and feel better.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在人称错误和重复，表达不完整。建议使用正确的人称代词，避免重复，并完整表达观点。

Ví dụ: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to show respect and care. For example, we send flowers when someone opens a new shop or is ill.

× He has plants a lot a variety of plants in my in our gardens.

✓ She has planted a lot of varieties of plants in our garden.

这里的代词“he”错误地指代了“my mother”，应使用“she”。另外，句子中“plants a lot a variety of plants”结构混乱，应改为“has planted a lot of varieties of plants”。

× and and he and he affects me that I have loved flowers.

✓ and she has influenced me to love flowers.

代词“he”错误，应为“she”，且表达不清晰，改为“she has influenced me to love flowers”更符合语义。

× He likes, he loves flowers very much.

✓ She likes, she loves flowers very much.

代词“he”错误，应指代“my mother”，应使用“she”。

× He has he love.

✓ She has loved.

代词“he”错误，应为“she”，且“has he love”语法错误，应为“has loved”。

× He have loved the flower since his his primary school and now he has a lot of flower flowers in our gardens.

✓ She has loved flowers since her primary school and now she has a lot of flowers in our garden.

代词“he”错误，应为“she”；“have”应为“has”以符合第三人称单数；“his his”重复且应为“her”；“flower flowers”重复，应为“flowers”；“gardens”应为单数“garden”。

× my mother has have planted many flowers in our home so my soulmate so my study desk have have been around have been surrounded by the flowers and I can easily smell the flower flower flowers.

✓ My mother has planted many flowers in our home, so my study desk has been surrounded by the flowers and I can easily smell the flowers.

“has have”重复，应为“has”；“have have been around have been surrounded”结构混乱，应为“has been surrounded”；“flower flower flowers”重复，应为“flowers”；“my soulmate”与句意不符，应删除。

× I can easily smell the flower flower flowers.

✓ I can easily smell the flowers.

“flower flower flowers”重复且用词不当，应使用复数形式“flowers”。

× it can makes me feel better.

✓ it can make me feel better.

情态动词“can”后应接动词原形，“makes”应改为“make”。

× he hosts in my country always sends flowers to others.

✓ People in my country always send flowers to others.

“he hosts”不合适，主语应为“People”；动词应与复数主语一致，改为“send”。

× but also it can sending the flowers can show our attention to others.

✓ but also sending flowers can show our attention to others.

“it can sending”结构错误，应去掉“it can”，直接用动名词“sending”。

× Sometimes we will send flowers to the to the.

✓ Sometimes we will send flowers to them.

句子不完整，缺少宾语，改为“send flowers to them”使句子完整。