Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you love flowers?
Thí sinh
I love sunflowers the most because of their bright yellow and brown. They remind me of sunny days and drink a lot of positive energy whenever I see them.
Giám khảo
Do you know anyone who loves flowers?
Thí sinh
Yes, my mom refer flowers. She enjoys gardening and often spends free time planting and taking care of different kinds of flowers. It helps her relax.
Giám khảo
Are there a lot of flowers where you live?
Thí sinh
Yes, there are a lot of flowers where I live. Uh, in my garden my mom has planted many beautiful flowers. She loves gardening.
Giám khảo
Do you take photos of flowers in your daily life?
Thí sinh
No, I don't like taking photos of flower because I think it's quite ordinary. I prefer take pictures of landscapes of people.
Giám khảo
Do people in your country often send flowers to others?
Thí sinh
Yes, in my country people often give flowers on special day short as birthdays or anniversary and festival. It's quite common for boys to give flowers to girls.
Do you love flowers?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có ý nghĩa, nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ chưa chính xác, ví dụ như 'drink a lot of positive energy' nên được sửa thành 'I get a lot of positive energy'. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời hiệu quả hơn.
Ví dụ: I love sunflowers the most because of their bright yellow and brown colors. They remind me of sunny days, and I get a lot of positive energy whenever I see them.
Do you know anyone who loves flowers?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng câu đầu tiên 'my mom refer flowers' không đúng ngữ pháp và gây khó hiểu. Bạn nên nói rõ hơn và sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng, ví dụ 'My mom loves flowers'. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
Ví dụ: Yes, my mom loves flowers. She enjoys gardening and often spends her free time planting and taking care of different kinds of flowers because it helps her relax.
Are there a lot of flowers where you live?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn khá đơn giản và có sự lặp lại về việc mẹ bạn thích làm vườn. Bạn nên thêm các chi tiết cụ thể hơn và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và mạch lạc hơn.
Ví dụ: Yes, there are many flowers where I live. For example, my mom has planted a variety of beautiful flowers in our garden because she loves gardening.
Do you take photos of flowers in your daily life?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Bạn có ý kiến rõ ràng nhưng câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp như 'prefer take' nên là 'prefer to take' và 'landscapes of people' không chính xác. Bạn nên sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ phù hợp hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và chính xác.
Ví dụ: No, I don't like taking photos of flowers because I think it's quite ordinary. I prefer to take pictures of landscapes or people instead.
Do people in your country often send flowers to others?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có ý chính nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ chưa chính xác, ví dụ 'special day short as' nên là 'special days such as'. Bạn nên sửa lỗi và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn.
Ví dụ: Yes, in my country, people often give flowers on special days such as birthdays, anniversaries, and festivals. It's quite common for boys to give flowers to girls.
× I love sunflowers the most because of their bright yellow and brown.
✓ I love sunflowers the most because of their bright yellow and brown colors.
The sentence lacks a noun after the adjectives 'bright yellow and brown'. Adding 'colors' clarifies what the adjectives describe, making the sentence grammatically correct.
× They remind me of sunny days and drink a lot of positive energy whenever I see them.
✓ They remind me of sunny days and give me a lot of positive energy whenever I see them.
The verb 'drink' is incorrectly used here. The intended meaning is that sunflowers provide or give positive energy, so 'give' is the correct verb to use.
× Yes, my mom refer flowers.
✓ Yes, my mom prefers flowers.
The verb 'refer' is incorrect in this context. The correct verb is 'prefer' to express liking or favoring something.
× She enjoys gardening and often spends free time planting and taking care of different kinds of flowers.
✓ She enjoys gardening and often spends her free time planting and taking care of different kinds of flowers.
The phrase 'spends free time' is missing the possessive pronoun 'her' to specify whose free time is being spent.
× No, I don't like taking photos of flower because I think it's quite ordinary.
✓ No, I don't like taking photos of flowers because I think it's quite ordinary.
The noun 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' because it refers to photos of multiple flowers in general.
× I prefer take pictures of landscapes of people.
✓ I prefer to take pictures of landscapes or people.
After 'prefer', the verb should be in the infinitive form 'to take'. Also, 'landscapes of people' is unclear; it should be 'landscapes or people' to indicate preference for either subject.
× Yes, in my country people often give flowers on special day short as birthdays or anniversary and festival.
✓ Yes, in my country people often give flowers on special days such as birthdays, anniversaries, and festivals.
The phrase 'special day short as' is incorrect. It should be 'special days such as' to introduce examples. Also, 'anniversary' and 'festival' should be plural to match 'birthdays'.