Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“pleas pleasant atmosphere”和“more happier”，建议加强语法基础，避免重复比较级，同时使表达更自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, I really like flowers because they create a pleasant atmosphere and make me feel happier.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在主谓不一致和语法错误，如“she really love”和“make her more relax”，建议注意主谓一致和形容词、副词的正确使用。

Ví dụ: Yes, my sister loves flowers and buys them almost every day because she enjoys their fragrance and finds them relaxing.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，如“needs a countryside”、“growled every year”，建议加强句子结构和词汇的准确使用，避免语义模糊。

Ví dụ: Yes, my hometown is surrounded by countryside where many wildflowers bloom every year. Also, there are many flower shops in the market, providing a great place for people to buy flowers.

Gợi ý: 回答较自然，但存在时态错误和表达不够简洁，如“if I met”和“take photos for them”，建议注意时态一致和介词的正确使用。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like to record my daily life with my smartphone, and when I see beautiful flowers on the street or in the garden, I like to take photos of them.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，如“in a in some special day”和“send flowers each other”，建议简化句子结构，注意介词和代词的正确使用。

Ví dụ: Yes, of course. People usually send flowers on special occasions, such as festivals or anniversaries. Couples often exchange flowers to express their feelings.

× Yes, I really like flowers because flowers can bring me a pleas pleasant atmosphere and I can feel more happier.

✓ Yes, I really like flowers because flowers can bring me a pleasant atmosphere and I can feel happier.

句中 'a pleas pleasant atmosphere' 中 'pleas' 是拼写错误，应为 'pleasant'。此外，'more happier' 是比较级错误，'happier' 已经是比较级，不能加 'more'。应直接用 'happier'。

× Yes, my sister. She really love flowers and she purchases flowers nearly every day.

✓ Yes, my sister. She really loves flowers and she purchases flowers nearly every day.

主语是第三人称单数 'She'，动词 'love' 应该加 's' 变为 'loves'，以符合主谓一致规则。

× She said she loves the flower smells and the flower can make her more relax.

✓ She said she loves the flower smells and the flowers can make her more relaxed.

'flower smells' 应为复数形式，'flower' 应改为 'flowers'。此外，'more relax' 是形容词用法错误，应为 'more relaxed'，表示状态。

× Yes, because my hometown needs a countryside and there were a lot of wildflowers abundantly growled every year.

✓ Yes, because my hometown is a countryside and there are a lot of wildflowers that grow abundantly every year.

'needs a countryside' 语义错误，应为 'is a countryside' 表示乡村。'growled' 是 'grow' 的过去式，且含义错误，应为 'grow'。此外，时态应与描述习惯相符，使用现在时 'are'。

× Additionally, there were a lot of flower shops in the market where can provide a best place for people to buy.

✓ Additionally, there are a lot of flower shops in the market which provide the best place for people to buy flowers.

'where can provide' 结构不完整，应改为 'which provide'。'a best place' 中 'best' 是最高级，前面不加不定冠词 'a'，应为 'the best place'。

× Yes, I like recording my daily life through the smartphone and if I met beautiful flowers in the street or in the garden, I really like to take photos for them.

✓ Yes, I like recording my daily life through my smartphone and if I meet beautiful flowers in the street or in the garden, I really like to take photos of them.

'if I met' 应为一般现在时 'if I meet' 表示条件句。'take photos for them' 介词用法错误，应为 'take photos of them'。

× Yes, of course. We usually send flowers in a in some special day, like different festivals or different anniversaries, the boyfriend or girlfriend will send flowers each other.

✓ Yes, of course. We usually send flowers on some special days, like different festivals or anniversaries. Boyfriends or girlfriends will send flowers to each other.

'send flowers in a in some special day' 介词和冠词错误，应为 'on some special days'。'each other' 前应加介词 'to'。'boyfriend or girlfriend' 应改为复数形式 'boyfriends or girlfriends' 以匹配一般情况。